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Re: Bitte um Ratschläge für writing skill

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How do movies or television influence peoples behavior? Use reasons ans specific examples to support your answer.


The advent of moving pictures dates back 130 years. The last 5 generations were growing up with this miracle when people can see a world beyond their immagination or reach. Ask your self! Have you ever been to Australia, to Japan or Arctis. I doubt you had. But we just hear those names and we have wonderful colorful pictures in our minds full of polar bears and glaciers, Kenguru and exotic plants. Since there is television and cinema our world became a big but familiar house.

The first steps of television were aiming at the need of people to be informed. News of the day ,the speech of the president and so on. But then the movies found their way in the flats and houses of people and you could watch your favorite movies drinking a bier and chating with your kids. The age of books, theater and walking after the work was overshadowed by the age of being lazy in front of the tube. I guess every person was addicted to this easy information and spend hours or days in front of the TV set. But after a while we learn that a book can bring much more pleasure and you cannot encounter a girl laying in your pijamas on the bed.

I am a big fan of Hollywood movies. And it is not important which genre. I enjoy them all the fear of being eaten in the horror movies, the laughters of comedies or this desire to reach for new and unknown in science fiction. They beautify my life and give me a special kind of joy de vivre. I think I am not the only one who feels like that. And that the most important influence of movies and television. Our lifes have more joy more imagination and more information about the whole world. That is the biggest asset that started just with some drawn pictures and a dream.




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Re: Bitte um Ratschläge für writing skill

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vetoleg hat geschrieben:Danke schön für die Hilfe man lernt hier echt unheimlich viel
another Writing Skills TOEFL Test

It has been said, " Not everything that is learned is contained in books. "Compare and contras
t knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Knowledge
ofthe last thousand years has become the most important resource on this planet. And there are many diverse / different ways to gain knowledge. But when we start in the school to learn reading, writing and arithmetic we realize that we cannot draw on theory without have been practicing in the particular matter. The further our education advances the more we have to practice everything. That is the reason, why I consider knowledge gained from experience more important.

My personal experience as a student
in veterinarian science was mainly sitting at home and learning from books, making notes and studying the same complicated points over and over. And to my shame I forgot the bulk of the learned information after the test. I felt myself as though I had too much to learn in a too fast / rapid pace. Often the next test was waiting and I started the same game with another topic, though.
The change was formidable
whenmy internships started and I had to work with the learned information. Despite the pressure that did not make it possible to relax I had enjoyed it because I was able to keep the knowledge in my memory and did not disappear as had always been the case when just theory was involved.
One of the most important factors is, that practice
often brings often so much feelings and actions that you do not have any time to be bored and although you are deprived of your leisure time you just enjoy going through it.

The experience of other people that I have learned
from books and talks shows the same point. Nobody can become an engineer, a nurse, a teacher, a doctor, a president and so forth, just by reading books. But you can achieve all those goals from people and their experiences if you are eager and keen to learning.
I do not want to say that books are not important
for learning. Books are teaching us and since the invention of the printing press, knowledge became diffused / spread all over the world. It is even impossible to imagine what had life been like before there were any books in the world. But there had been an age lasting approximately 5000 years long when people learned without written help and implements as internet. This proofs that the most important part of the learning process takes place during work and practicing among people.


Liebe Grüsse joy


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Re: Bitte um Ratschläge für writing skill

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vetoleg hat geschrieben:Danke schön für die Hilfe man lernt hier echt unheimlich viel Gerne geschehen!another Writing Skills TOEFL Test

It has been said, " Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contra
ct knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Knowledge became the
world’s most important resource over the last thousand years. And there are many different ways to gain knowledge. But if we start to learn reading, writing and arithmetic at school we realize that we cannot take advantage of the theory without combining it with practical exercises. The further our education advances the more we have to practise everything. (That is the reason, why I consider knowledge gained from experience more important.) (Diesen Satz in Klammern nach unten verschoben)

My personal experi
ence as a student in veterinarian science was nothing but sitting at home and learning from books, making notes and studying the same complicated points over and over. And to my shame I forgot the bulk of the learned information after the test. I felt myself as though I had too much to learn in a too fast pace. Often the next test was waiting and I started the same game with another topic, though.
The change was formidable as our /
my internship(s) started and we / I had to work with the learned / acquired information. Despite the pressure that did not make it possible to relax I enjoyed it because I have not forgotten my learning skills any more as always happened when I received purely theoretical education. That is the reason, why I consider knowledge gained from experience more important.
In my opinion, one of the most important factors is that practice often brings so much feelings and actions that you do not have any time to be bored and although there is hardly any leisure time left you just enjoy going through it.

The experience of other people that I have learned
from books and talking about shows the same point. Nobody can become an engineer, a nurse, a teacher, a doctor, a president and so forth, just by reading books. But you can achieve all those goals if you are eager and keen to learn from people and their experiences.
I do not want to say that books are not important in learning. Books are teaching us and since there are devices to print
/ printer, knowledge soon diffused in every part of the world / soon spread across the globe. It is not even possible to imagine what the world would have been like before there were any books. But there was an age for approximately 5000 years when people learned without written help by internet tools. It is one of the proofs that the most important part of our learning process takes place during work and practising among people.
Unterschied zwischen “practice und practise”
Practice (noun) Beispiel: We need to put this exercise into practice
Practise (verb) Beispiel: To learn English well you have to practise
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vetoleg hat geschrieben:How do movies or television influence peoples behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

The advent of moving pictures dates back 130 years. The last 5 generations
have grown up with this miracle through which people can see a world beyond their imagination or reach. Ask yourself! Have you ever been to Australia, to Japan or the Arctic. I doubt you had. But we just hear those names and we have wonderfulandcolorful / beautifully colored pictures in our minds full of polar bears and glaciers, kangaroos and exotic plants. Since there is television and cinema our world has become a big but familiar house.

The first steps of television
programmes were directed toward the need of people to be informed. News of the day, the speech of the president and other information were on TV. But then the movies found their way in the flats and houses of people and you could watch your favorite movies drinking a beer and chatting with your kids. Thus the age of books, theatre and walking after the work was overshadowed by the age of being lazy just sitting in front of the telly. I guess every person was addicted to those easy information and spent hours or days in front of the TV set. But after a while we learn that a book can bring much more pleasure and you cannot encounter a girl lying in your”pyjamas on the bed.

I am a big fan of Hollywood movies. And it is not important which genre. I enjoy them all
; the fear of being eaten in the horror movies, the laughter-provoking comedies or this longing for something new and unknown in science fiction. They beautify my life and give me a special kind of joy de vivre. I think I am not the only one who feels like that. And that is the most important influence of movies and television. Our lives are more enjoyable, more imaginative and we get more information about the whole world. That is the biggest asset that started just with some drawn pictures and a dream.

Liebe Grüsse joy


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Re: Bitte um Ratschläge für writing skill

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Hallo Leute

Ich habe meinen TOEFL bestanden mit Super Ergebnissen und im Writing wo ich mir super Sorgen machte, habe ich 24 Punkte. Die ANforderung war 23 Punkte, also gemeistert.
Ich danke euch allen für die Hilfe!!!!

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Hurra Hurra Hurra! :freu: :freu: :freu:

Gut gemacht, Oleg! Viel Glück für die Zukunft und alles Liebe! :prost:

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