Ich bin verzweifelt auf der Suche nach jemandem, der mir mein Motivationsschreiben korrekturlesen kann. Ich bewerbe mich derzeit für ein Austausch-Semester in Detroit und das Letzte Mal, als ich Englisch gesprochen / geschrieben habe, ist leider schon viel zu lange her und das merkt man natürlich sofort. Das Motivationsschreiben sollte natürlich in einwandfreiem grammatischen Zustand sein, deswegen brauche ich unbedingt eure Hilfe!
Wenn ihr mir weiterhelfen könntet wäre ich euch unendlich dankbar.
Viele Dank im Voraus,
m0zart
My motivation for a study stay at the College for Creative Studies in Detroit
My motives for a stay abroad in the USA:I’m very interested in the American culture and language for a long time, especially since I’m studying Product Design. By a longer stay in the USA I expect to attain a new way of “design thinking”. Particularly within the creative range a intercultural exchange broadens one’s mind very much, which can be very interesting too for the students of de CCS.Many of my friends had the chance to gain interesting experiences in the USA and by their narrations my desire grew more ande more to become acquainted with the American culture and people. It would be great to establish many contacts with the students in Detroit, which exist still beyond the exchange program.
Why I want to apply for CCS:
The excellent international reputation and the high level of education drew my attention to this university. By discussions with students who already spent one semester at the CCS I became certain that this school could support me in the best way to improve myself further. When investigating for hours on the homepage of the CCS I discovered numerous interesting projects and informed about different subjects like “VisCom” oder “Design Research”. Meanwhile my desire grew more and more to spend a semester at this college.
My strengths and abilities:
I’m very sociable and open minded about something new. These attributes make it easier for me to sozialize and integrate myself into the American culture. Since my native country is Austria, however I’m studying in Germany I developed a high level of open-mindedness which enables me to adapt quickly to new people and situations.
Furthermore I possess a high level of apprehension and I am very resilient even in stressful situations, which I find as very useful within a design study.
I like to develop unusual ideas and thoughts and elaborate them along with my fellow students.
Expectations to the stay in the USA:
From the study stay in Detroit I expect a personal as well as a creative development. I want to use the differences between the University in Pforzheim and the CCS to broaden my creative horizon.
I already possess some knowledge of the English language, but I want to use the stay in the US also to improve my English clearly.
Furthermore I really would like to do one or two internships in the USA, and I think, a study stay at the CCS would help me a lot, recieving a good internship.
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