wäre nett, wenn ihr mir helfen könntet! hatten heut n text in englisch bekommen und sollten die geschichte weiter schreiben, allerdings stehts bei mit nicht so gut mit zeitformen usw. (?!?!)
Nunja, wäre ganz nett, wenn ihr euch das mal anschaut und mir mögliche Fehler nennt (am besten gleich heut noch, brauchs schon zu morjen
....thanks!!!)
jetuil
With a awfully beating heart I dicided to jump into the room to frightened the offender, but the only who frightened was me. A small mouse rustled in the bin and didn’t come out of it, mabye it climbed the desk beside, lost the hold and fell down.
Relieved, I put the trophy away, next to the door and went to the telefon to call the room service, because never before I liked such animals and I was really happy it didn’t could get out of the bin for the next time.
The telefon rang already three times when I felt something behind and a new wave of fear came over me, so when I turned round it was to late. I only saw, that a person who was unknown to me at this moment hit me with the trophy of Boom Boom.
When I woke up, I didn’t could remember. I closed my eyes again and thought of the dream I had have before. There had been Boom Boom and me in his condo, nobody else had been there when Boom Boom gone to a cupboard to pull out a picture. He shown it and I recognized our aunt Betty. What could that mean?
Suddenly it knocked and aunt Betty came in my room. No - when I looked around I saw that I was at her guestroom on the couch. She brought me warm cookies and milk, smiled at me and said that it’s all right. So what did she mean? Then I remembered of all that had happened, I jumped to one’s feet and wanted to run away because I thought my aunt hit me down, but she took my hand and meant she would me explain everything.
She told me I was found on the floor of Boom Booms condo, but the doctor meant I hadn’t to go to the hospital, so my aunt brought me to her.As I asked why the doctor called her, she become red and after a few seconds she said nobody else had been available. Everything was really mysterious. While she was speaking on I drunk a bit of the milk and I began to fall in sleep, again.
At next time I woke up my mom came in and when she saw me sitting on the couch , she ran to me, hughed and kissed me. A police man went right behind her. I frightend and thought, whether I mabye had drunk to much, again. Could it be that all was only a dream?
Unfortunately no, the two told me my aunt Betty was the offender of everything had happened in the last time. She had killed Boom Boom, the lawyer of him too, and I should be dead also, because she wanted have the estate of Boom Boom, but before, the old will and all who know about it had to be killed.
My aunt was send to prison for the rest of her life because of murder.
