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arabah
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essay torture korrigieren

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Torture
Whe people use torture? Since the ancient Greece people use Torture to get information from enemies.The most important time of torture was in the middle ages. Most of the people were tortured because they dont belive in the same god.There were many methods to torture someone in the medival times.The main torture was the physical torture.One of the famous torture element is the strechbench.They chain yout arms and legs on the bench and stretch your body.This method is very painfull.Today people use technology in torture.For example they use strong electric impulse to torture someone without leaving any wounds.Torture is today illegal because it breaks the humanright law.But some nations are using torture for example the USA and the 3rd world countries.There are two types of torturing the first type is the physical type and the second type is the psychical type. The psychical type of tortue is that they torture someone without causing any pain.An example is the sleep deprivation or to rape someone from your family.When is torture justified?Torture is always not justified because it is barbaric and stupid.Only when it is necessary can torture them.For instance a bomb is in a building and many innocent people are there.Then they can defuse the bomb.But I think that torture is useless.




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Re: essay torture korrigieren

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arabah hat geschrieben: Hi arabah and welcome! :)

Torture

Why do/When do people use torture? Since the times of ancient Greece people have used torture to pump information from enemies. Torture was especially used in the Middle Ages. Most of the people were tortured for religious reasons, e.g. because they did not believe in the same god. There were many methods of torture in medieval times, most of them aiming at causing the victim intense physical pain. One of the famous instruments of torture was the stretching bank. They chained your arms and legs to the rack and stretched your body. This method was very painfull.
Today people use modern technology in torture. For example they use strong electric shocks to torture someone without leaving any wounds. Torture is illegal today because it violates the human rights. But some nations are still using it. (Since your list of nations still using torture is incomplete and debatable, please leave it out!)
There are two types of torturing. The first type is the physical type and the second type is the psychological/emotional type. The psychological type of tortue does not necessariliy cause pain. An example is the sleep deprivation or to rape of a relative before the victim's eyes.

In what cases
is torture justified? Torture is never justified because it is barbaric and stupid. The only possible exception could be the saving of innocent people. For instance, when a bomb has been planted in a crowded building. When the authorities can find out where it is, they can defuse it.
But I think that torture is useless.

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