Ann comes to her mum and says: "I want to be a celebrity".
Her mum asks: " Why do you want that"?
Ann: At first those people have much money, so they own one or more expensive cars, villas or yachts. Also they eat gourmet-food and wear designer-clothes. At second they have a big fan club. People are intereseted about their persons and admired them.
If I be an celebrity, I will have these things. It would be so nice!
Mother: Being world-famous isn´t only nice. Surlely the things you list up sounds really good but that isn´t all.
The celebrities have no privacy. Were ever they go, what ever they do, the paparrazies follow and watch them. And infomation, which you don´t want to publish, are passed on the people. Believe me, it isn´t good when everybody knows so many things about your person.
Another point is the pressure: At first those people have a lot of termins, and that is very stressful. At second most of them must look great. Imagine, if you are one of them, you musn´t go out without a perfect make-up.
But now I must give you the badest aspect: Have you ever heard the word stalker? That means crazy people which make psychological terror. Many of them threaten the person, which they followed. An attentat is the badest consequence.
Now, think, whether you want to be a celebrity.
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Ich geb keine Garantie auf Richtigkeit und streich auch nur das Gröbste, was mir auf die Schnelle aufgefallen ist, an 
Ich würd's vielleicht so schreiben: (bin mir grad nicht mehr sicher, ob man das so sagen kann... ich weiß, warum ich keine Korrekturen mache