Bitte mal drüber schauen.

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Sabrinar
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Bitte mal drüber schauen.

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HI IHR LIEBEN!!! :D
kann jemand al drüber schauen.
Vielen dank im Vorraus!!!


Bie der Aufgabe , sollte ich ein eine Person als Sprecher zu einer Konferenz einladen. Dieser Brief soll in Form eines Geschäftsbriefes sein. Adresse etc musste ich weg lassen, weil es sonst nicht freigestellt wurde.



Dear Martin Much,

This Year annual Travel Conference takes place on 6th and 7th October in theConference Center, Peterborough. On the Conference are many interesting participants of the Travel Shop Industry.
We want to organize a wonderful and fascination conference.
We are sure that you are the right person for talking in the discussion. We need someone who lead it, someone who have enough experience and the right personality, someone who is calm and polite and we know that you are fantastic at meetings.

Therefore we would like to invite you to speak in the discussion.
You don’t have to pay for something. The organisation committee would be delighted to pay for your travel, hotelroom and your food.

We very much hope that you can attend the conference and would be grateful if you could inform us by 31st March at the latest.

If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.
I hope we will see you on the conference.



Yours sincerely

Angela Chapman
Senior Conference Organiser




Delfino
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Re: Bitte mal drüber schauen.

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Sabrinar hat geschrieben:Hallo ihr Lieben! :D
Kann bitte jemand einmal drüber schauen.
Vielen Dank im Vorraus!!!


Die Aufgabe ist eine Person als Sprecher zu einer Konferenz einzuladen.
Dieser Brief soll in Form eines Geschäftsbriefes verfasst sein.
Adresse etc. musste ich weglassen, weil es hier sonst nicht freigestellt wird.



Dear Mr. Martin Much,

We are currently organising our Annual Travel Conference,
which will take
place from 6th till 7th October at the
Conference Centre in Peterborough.

We appreciate your expertise in the area of ...
and your great experience in calming heated debates.

Therefore we hereby invite you to talk about ...
and hope you will also be available for the following panel discussion.


As always we want to organize a wonderful and fascination conference.
So we have already invited the leading people of the travel industry,
which will enable you to talk to many interesting people.


The organisation committee can offer you to pay for your travelling expenses,
accommodation and board.


We would be delighted to welcome you at our conference and would be grateful
if you could inform us about your participation by 31st March at the latest.
Please do not hesitate to contact us, if you have any further questions.

I hope to meet you at the conference.


Yours sincerely,

Angela Chapman
Senior Conference Manager
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