Halbes Jahr in Canada:Brief

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yorsch
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Halbes Jahr in Canada:Brief

Beitrag von yorsch » 6. Mär 2010 15:46

Hey guys :D

ich hab das große Glück, im September ein halbes Jahr nach kanada zufahren.
Dafür soll ich aber alles mögliche vorbereiten, u.a. auch einen Brief schreiben.
Könnt ihr mir dabei etwas helfen?
ich habe hier die Roh-form des Briefes, wenn ihr rechtschreibfehler oder form fehler findet, eifnach verbessern bitte :D
wäre sehr nett.

Dear Guest Family,
Hi, I'm Lucas B...,I'm 16 years old (in November will be my 17th birthday) and I come from a city near Düsseldorf, calles Neuss.
I'm very excited about the journey to Canada,and I think, i will be a big adventure.
In my freetime, I do a lot of outdoor activities like playing football oder tennis.
Wenn ich mal in der nähe eines see's bin(wie heisst das im englischen?), I like to sail or to surf.
Only doing gymnastics i hate.
My mom works as a physiotherapist, my father is a dentist.
I have one little sister,J..., who's very good at ice skating (and I begrdge her about it :) ).
My friends take a big part in my life.
After School, I often going with them to McDonald's or in the city.
After my stay with my host family , I expect a better knowledge of the english language and the canadian culture.
ok, I think that's everything.I don't know what more to write :D.
I look forward to youre meeting.

Sincerly
Lucas B...




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Re: Halbes Jahr in Canada:Brief

Beitrag von Delfino » 6. Mär 2010 18:59

yorsch hat geschrieben:Hey guys,
ich habe das große Glück, im September ein halbes Jahr nach Kanada zu fahren.
Dafür muss ich noch alles mögliche vorbereiten, u.a. auch einen Brief an meine Gastfamilie schreiben.
Könnt ihr mir dabei etwas helfen?
Ich habe hier die Rohform des Briefes, wenn ihr Rechtschreibfehler oder
Formfehler findet bitte ich euch sie einfach zu verbessern.
Das wäre sehr nett. :D
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Dear guest family,
Hi, I'm Lucas B... and I'm 16 years old. In November this year I will celebrate my 17th birthday.
I come from a town called Neuss near the bigger city Düsseldorf in North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany.

My mom works as a physiotherapist and my father is a dentist.
J... is my little sister, who's very good at ice skating.
I envy her a bit for her skills. :)

I'm very excited about my journey to Canada, and I think, it will be the first really big adventure in my life.
In my free time, I do a lot of outdoor activities like playing football or tennis.
When I'm at the sea I like to sail or to surf. The only sport I hate is gymnastics.

My friends are another important part in my life.
After School we often meet at McDonald's or go in the city.

I hope my time with you in Canada will allow me to improve my knowledge of the English language
and increase my understanding of the Canadian culture.

Please do not hesitate to ask me anything you'd like to know about me or Germany.

I'm looking forward to meeting you.

Best wishes,
Lucas B...
Englische Grammatik
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I'd recommend you try to increase your English skills as much as you can before you travel abroad
otherwise the time there won't be as exciting as it could be.

You may even try to communicate with your friends and family in English
to exorcise the use of English in everyday life as often as possible.
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Re: Halbes Jahr in Canada:Brief

Beitrag von Duckduck » 6. Mär 2010 22:19

Delfino hat geschrieben:
You may even try to communicate with your friends and family in English
to exorcise :freu: :lol: the use of English in everyday life as often as possible.
Hihihihi, that's a nice one.
:prost:
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Re: Halbes Jahr in Canada:Brief

Beitrag von Delfino » 7. Mär 2010 01:53

Delfino hat geschrieben:After school ...

You may even try to communicate with your friends and family in English
to exercise the use of English in everyday life as often as possible.
@Duckduck
Thank you for looking after me so well.
Though, it's really funny... :big_thumb:
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yorsch
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Re: Halbes Jahr in Canada:Brief

Beitrag von yorsch » 7. Mär 2010 20:12

:censored:!

hätte nie gedacht das ich sooooo schlecht bin :D

naja aber danke für die Berichtigung, werd das dann so abschicken :spin:

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