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mina0210
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text bitte korregieren !! wichtig !!

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The outback is hot, huge and almost empty centry.
You can't see many people in the outback.
Many Aborigines live in large parts which are desert,
so the Aborigines don't see the desert as a hot and infertile place.
Laws helped the Aborigines to regain their land, because white
Australians forced them to live on settlements.
Now some Aborigine family groups live on their own land,
so that they could continue their culture (the songs, stories, dances)
in their own land, because their culture is very importsnt for the Aborigines.
Sometimes it does not rain in the outback for months and even years,
so bush fires are a problem.
You must search a long time for water, because usually the next water tank is half a
kilometre away.




Duckduck
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Re: text bitte korregieren !! wichtig !!

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mina0210 hat geschrieben:The outback is the hot, huge and almost empty centre of Australia.
You don't see many people in the outback.
Many Aborigines live in large areas which actually are deserts, but the Aborigines don't see the desert as a hot and infertile place.
In past years laws helped the Aborigines to regain their land, because white Australians had forced them to live in settlements for many years.
Now some Aborigine family groups live on their own land so that they can continue their culture (the songs, stories, dances)
on their own land, because their culture is very important for the Aborigines.
Sometimes it does not rain in the outback for months and even years,
so bush fires are a problem.
You must search a long time for water, because usually the next water tank is quite far away.
Well done!

Good luck says
Duckduck
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