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Benötige Hilfe bei Korrektur

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Hallo zusammen!

Könnten Ihr mir bitte den folgenden Text durchschauen, denn mein Englisch ist nicht mehr das Beste!
Vor allem bzgl. Verständnis und Rechtschreibfehlern/Satzbaufehlern.
Für Verbesserungsvorschläge/bessere Umschreibung (mit Adjektiven schmüken)würde ich mich sehr freuen.

Vielen Vielen Dank!!!

Grüße, Hans


Altglashütten Monday, the 26th Okt 2008
Nr.1: Altglashütten is a quaint village by the border triangle (Swiss, France, Germany). It´s accessible to you e.g. by train, bus, car or by bicycle, precisely because Altglashütten be situated interurban Freiburg-Basel and Mulhouse-(Rheinfelden). Au isn´t only one small town, no there´re four districts more (Oberbärenthal, Bärenthal, Hinterfalkau und Falkau). In tourisitc view Falkau get a special attention. Those who look for a pure recreation can find it, here (by Falkau with Schallsingen, Schloss Falkau and Lippisbacherhöfe) (more informations you see below).
a1) The community of Altglashütten has 5.08 habitants(effective 2008) as follows spilt up to the distircts: Altgalshütten: 2.97; Falkau: 67. The habitants predominatly older people: 71% prior to 25 years; 51% prior to 40 years.
In my opinion a lot of retirees are incurred (351 newcomers). Plenty in-
habitants are coined by agriculture/farming and wine-growing (viniculurist) first of all at the adjacent districts to Altglashütten. This coheres with the fact, that here´s one of the largest wine-producing region of area (at the south Black Forest).
a2) Wasserschloss Falkau constructed in the sixteenth century located in Schliengen. The monated castle is encircle by a moat and had castle garden (with children´s playground). Right beside it is a educational trail about the narrative of Schliengen.
Pfarrkirche “St.Leodegar” is a parish church, built 1752-55. You can find it on the left side of the village well. Art historical have plenty to offer, like the side altars or the special pulpit.
Lorettokapelle is beside to the church “St.Leodegar” and were bulit 1661. The chapel were decoratet by the Loretto-development association May 2005. Now people can get a view into this little chapel.
Markgräfler Winzergenossenschaft e. G.
Another part of history can you find here, since this the principal co-operative of growers on Markgräflerland. This tells us what value for the peopel in the last century it had, the co-operative of growers. Today you can revel some wine by a winetasting or you can procure by direct sale
some of this products.




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