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Aufgabe:
You work for a PR agency. One of your clients is Under the Sea Aquariums Ltd in Blackpool, Lancashire, FY11 8JH, a company who own several aquarium entertainment centres.
Tel:…. Website: ….
You are discussing a leaflet with your client. You make the following notes during your meeting.
Meeting notes:
Aquarium visit- entertaining, educational, interesting. Over 200 species of fish and other underwater creatures (crabs, starfish, etc.). Biggest collection of tiger sharks in Europe. Divers feed fish underwater. State of the art communication systems means kids can watch and ask divers questions. Glass tunnel under aquarium (fish all around)- longest tunnel in world- 110m. Large collection of piranhas (meat-eating fish). Also reptile centre (snakes, crocodiles). Online booking/details of special events on website. Free face- painting. Gift shop and restaurant. Credit/ debit cards accepted. Under 16 half- price. Discount for groups of 10+. Opening hours 09:30- 18:00 all year. Closed public holidays.


Meine Lösung

AQUARIUM VISIT – ENTERTAINING, EDUCATIONAL, INTERESTING
at
UNDER THE SEA AQUARIUMS LTD.


Over 200 SPECIES of fish and other underwater creatures
BIGGEST collection of TIGER SHARKS in Europe
Divers feed fish underwater
Large collection of PIRANHAS
and
Reptile centre



ART COMMUNICATIONS SYSTEM: kids can watch and ask divers questions.


GLASS TUNNEL under aquarium- fish all around
LONGEST TUNNEL IN WORLD
110 metres.


FREE face- painting
and
Gift shop & restaurant.


Credit/ debit cards accepted
Under 16 HALF PRICE
Discount for GROUPS of 10+

OPENING HOURS 09:30 – 18:00 all year
Closed public holidays


ONLINE BOOKIND and details of SPECIAL EVENTS
You find on our website
*****


VISIT US
*****


CONTACT US
Tel: *****

[Duckduck]

Hallo

Ich bin nicht ganz sicher, ob ich die Aufgabenstellung richtig verstehe! Solltest Du nicht vielleicht aus den "notes" einen fortlaufenden Text machen, also ganze Sätze formulieren? Wenn ich das richtig sehe, hast Du ja jetzt nur die Stichworte ich verschiedene Punkte zusammengestellt?
Kannst du noch mal deutlicher die Aufgabe nennen?

Good luck says
Duckduck

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Aus den Gesprächsnotizen soll ich ein Leaflet machen. Also alles schön kurz und informativ darstellen.