Bitte um Korrektur

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Hallo,
wäre nett, wenn ich mal wieder Hilfe in Form einer Korrektur bekommen könnte. Die Überschrift war vorgegegeben, dazu sollten wir eine "composition" schreiben. Grammatikalisch werden sicher einige Fehler drin sein, aber auch inhaltlich bin ich mir nicht sicher, ob ich es getroffen habe.
Ganz lieben Dank,
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There is just a small step from booze culture to drug culture

What does the topic mean? At the beginnig I want to show, that „booze culture“ and „drug culture“ are elastic terms. Booze culture – this term could stand not only for excessive drinking at occations like the "Oktoberfest" or like you can find it regularly at the weekends in some clubs and bars, but also for moderate drinking at someones birthday, sylvester or to take a nip of wine at a restaurant.
And who belongs to the „drug culture“? The exhippie, who is today a graphicdesigner, taking twice a year a joint? The manager, could only bear up the pressure with taking cocain, the housewife, using pills to take their mind of her little family drama, or the junkie, having no home, prostitute oneself at the central station?
As you can see, a clearly definition isn´t possible. Thus the statement „ There is just a small step from booze culture to drug culture“ is very generalized.
Some members of the reggea- or skatersubculture strictly disapprove alcohol, but they regularly consume marihuana, other members of the nightclub scene again, won´t take ever drugs, but they have manny drinks in the night and of course it is possible, that there is this lonly, unsure, with low- self-esteem teenager, taking alcohol as a starter drug. As a result you can see, there are so many individual ways, to have a drink or to take drugs, that it isn´t possible, to say from alcohol to drugs is a small step. Furthermore you have to consider, that alcohol is also a substance making addictioned, also it is a drug, to.