Referat korrigieren, Bitte!!!

[ChantalMueller]

Hallo,
Ich muss bis morgen ein Referat über die Saint Pauls Cathedrale halten und ich bin mir sehr unsicher wegen den Zeiten. Es wäre wirklich toll, wenn mir das jemand korrigieren könnte.

Hier ist der Text:

The Cathedral of Saint Pauls is one of the largest and most historie churches in the United States. As a monument, the Cathedral is a destination for people of all beliefs. They respect and welcome people who may not share their faith in Jesus Christ. The Cathedral have a big meaning for many people because a lot of famous people get there married like for example Lady Diana and Prince Charles. But there are lot of famous people buried, too. This is as well the reason why so many people want to visit the chrurch even 200,000 visitors each year.

Könnt ihr mir dann vielleicht noch sagen, ob ich etwas wichtiges vergessen habe ?

Vielen Dank schonmal.

[Duckduck]

Hallo
Bevor ich hier korrigiere möchte ich Dir raten, nochmal im Internet etwas rumzustöbern und Informationen wie: wann erbaut, von wem, Größe, Baustil usw. herauszufinden. Ich weiß nicht, wofür Du das Referat brauchst, aber das ist jedenfalls wichtiger als wer dort geheiratet hat, oder? Warum nicht mal bei Wikipedia schauen, die Seiten gibt's ja auch in Englisch... Und eines vorweg: St Paul's ist nicht in den USA..

Good luck says
Duckduck

[ChantalMueller]

Hallo.
Vielen Dank für den Tipp. Ich habe den Text nochmal überarbeitet und mir im Internet noch ein paar Informationen rausgesucht, die ich mit in den Text genommen habe.

Hier ist er nochmal:

The Cathedral of Saint Paul's is one of the largest and most historie churches. St Paul's Cathedral has had a very interesting history. The Bishop of the East Saxons built the first wooden church. At the end of the 7th century, it was built in stone by Erkenwald, Bishop of London. In 962 and 1087, the Cathedral was destroyed by fires, but each time it was rebuilt. By that time, it was one of the largest cathedrals in Europe. On the night of the 2nd of September 1666, was the great fire of London and it destroyed all of London, even 13,200 houses and 89 churches, including the St. Paul's Cathedral. But in 1669, Christopher Wren designed the so-called 'Great Model' for the new St. Paul's Cathedral. As a monument, the Cathedral is a destination for people of all beliefs. They respect and welcome people who may not share their faith in Jesus Christ. The Cathedral have a big meaning for many people because a lot of famous people get there married like for example Lady Diana and Prince Charles. But there are lot of famous people buried, too. This is as well the reason why so many people want to visit the chrurch even 200,000 visitors each year.

Ich hoffe, dass der Text jetzt besser ist. (:

[Duckduck]

Hallo.
Vielen Dank für den Tipp. Ich habe den Text nochmal überarbeitet und mir im Internet noch ein paar Informationen rausgesucht, die ich mit in den Text genommen habe.

Hier ist er nochmal:

The Saint Paul's Cathedral of is one of the largest and most historie churches in the world. St Paul's Cathedral It has had a very interesting history. The Bishop of the East Saxons built the first wooden church. At the end of the 7th century it was built in stone by Erkenwald, Bishop of London. In 962 and 1087 the Cathedral was destroyed by fires, but each time it was rebuilt again. By that time, it was one of the largest cathedrals in Europe. On the night of the 2nd of September 1666 there was the great fire of London and it destroyed all of London, about 13,200 houses and 89 churches, including the St. Paul's Cathedral. But in 1669, Christopher Wren designed the so-called 'Great Model' for the new St. Paul's Cathedral.
As a monument and a sight the Cathedral is a destination for people of all beliefs. Everybody is respected and welcome to watch or pray, even people who may not share their faith in Jesus Christ.
The Cathedral is very important for many people and universally known, because a lot of famous people got there married there, for example Lady Diana and Prince Charles.
But there are a lot of famous people buried in the Cathedral, too.
This is as well the reason why so many people want to visit the chrurch - about 200,000 visitors each year.

Ich hoffe, dass der Text jetzt besser ist. (:

Yo, much better!

Good luck says
Duckduck

[ChantalMueller]

Vielen, lieben Dank.