Textkorrektur: Dringend!!!

[Lukas_Streiter]

Hallo, ich bräuchte ganz dringend eine Textkorrektur von dem unten stehenden Text. Ich würde mich sehr freuen! Lg Lukas. Es ist wirklich dringend! :S

The story begins with a small white rabbit. When Alice sees him she follows him to a hole where she climbs in. When she goes in she recognizes that she is falling down. At the end of her fall, she comes to a large hall with several doors in it. In the middle of the hall there is a key. But the door in which it fits is too small for her. Alice is about to give up, but when she finds a bottle with the label ‘Drink Me’, she shrinks to the right size for the door.
After a while she finds a cake that says ‘Eat Me’. On eating this big cake, Alice grows big again and begins to cry. Her tears become a flood and when she begins to shrink again, she gets rescued by a mouse before she could drown in her pool of tears.
A few hours and many problems later, Alice enters the Duchess’s house in the woods. In the house she makes the acquaintance of the Cheshire Cat. The Duchess cannot attend to her, as she has to attend a party given by the Queen. From the cat, Alice learns that everyone here is mad – they must be mad, or they would not be here.
When Alice joins the tea party of March Hare and Hatter, they just make polite conversation. After some time, and after changing seats, Alice leaves the tea party and enters the garden where the old Queen is having a party.
When the seven-year-old girl joins the royal procession, the Queens of Hearts ask her to play croquet with them.
The Knave of Hearts stands accused of stealing the Queen’s tarts. Alice is called to testify after she has grown larger again. She is impertinent and the King orders her to leave the court, but she refuses. Alice is outraged by the unfairness of the court's proceedings and provokes the Queen to order her execution. She tells the court that they're nothing but a pack of cards, and they rise up and attack her.
In the end of the story, she realizes that she has been asleep for a long time in her sister's lap. Alice tells her sister about the events of her marvellous dream and then goes in to tea.

[Duckduck]

Hallo, ich bräuchte ganz dringend eine Textkorrektur von dem unten stehenden Text. Ich würde mich sehr freuen! Lg Lukas. Es ist wirklich dringend! :S

The story begins with a small white rabbit. Alice sees and follows him to a hole in the ground, climbs into it and realises that she is falling down. At the end of her fall she finds herself in a large hall with several doors in its walls. In the middle of the hall there is a key. But the door into which it fits is too small for her. Alice is about to give up but then she finds a bottle with the label ‘Drink Me’, drinks and shrinks to the right size for the door.
After a while she finds a cake that says ‘Eat Me’. On eating this big cake, Alice grows big again and begins to cry. Her tears become a flood and when she begins to shrink again, she gets rescued by a mouse before she drowns in her pool of tears.
A few hours and many problems (adventures?) later Alice enters the Duchess’s house in the woods. In the house she makes the acquaintance of the Cheshire Cat. The Duchess cannot attend to her as she has to attend a party given by the Queen. The cat explains to Alice that everyone here is mad – they must be mad, or they would not be here.
When Alice joins the tea party of March Hare and the Mad Hatter, they just make polite conversation. After some time, and after changing seats, Alice leaves the tea party and enters the garden where the old Queen is having a party.
When the seven-year-old girl joins the royal procession, the Queen of Hearts asks her to play croquet with them.
The Knave of Hearts stands accused of stealing the Queen’s tarts. Alice is called to testify after she has grown larger again. She is impertinent and the King orders her to leave the court, but she refuses. Alice is outraged by the unfairness of the court's proceedings and provokes the Queen to order her execution. She tells the court that they're nothing but a pack of cards, and they rise up and attack her.
At the end of the story she realises that she has been asleep for a long time in her sister's lap. Alice tells her sister about the events of her marvellous dream and then goes in to tea.

Well, well, well: great text!!!

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Lukas_Streiter]

Dankeschön!