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[azadi]

Hallo
ich muss Fragen (engl) in engl beantworten,Bitte könnt nachschauen ob grammatikalisch,satzbau,zeit alles stimmt?

1.What were the main reasons why Britain set out to build the British Empire?
One reasons is the economical fact.They want to create a economy, which can adjust with all rivals they had.With the raw matrial they want to create a monople and to capture the trade market,the fight between ohter europen countries,who were rivals rivals of British
Not just economically aspect why Britain perambulate an capture almost the whole world htey want to have the world,where they create colony and transporting slaves from place to an other.
2. What influence did the mercantilists have?
They could decide how much export good and how much import good would been export and import.their idea was to createa essential trade.So export more than import just to create a Britsh label- with much profit.
supermacy
3. How did the imperialists try to justify white supermacy?
Refering to darwin's theory they are the superior nation and have to well-behaved people from their colony,who were under then.They saw themselves in direction and wanto to keeping their value,also the religion

[Keswick]

Hallo
ich muss Fragen (engl) in Englisch beantworten. Bitte könnt ihr nachschauen ob grammatikalisch, Satzbau, Zeit alles stimmt?

1.What were the main reasons why Britain set out to build the British Empire?
One reason was the economical fact.(Und der war?) They wanted to create an economy which could adjust1) with all rivals they had. With the raw matrial they wanted to create a monopole and to capture the trade market. The fight between other European countries, who were rivals rivals of British.2)
Not just economically aspect why Britain perambulate an capture almost the whole world htey want to have the world,where they create colony and transporting slaves from place to an other.3)

2. What influence did the mercantilists have?
They could decide on on the numbers of export and import. Their idea was to create essential trade. That meant more export more than import just to create a Britsh label - with much profit.
supermacy4)
3. How did the imperialists try to justify white supermacy?
Referring to Darwin's theory they are the superior nation and have to well-behaved people from their colony,who were under then5).They saw themselves in direction1) and wanted to to keeping their values and religion

1) Was meinst du hier?
2) Hier fehlt ein Verb.
3) Dieser Satz macht keinen Sinn.
4) Sinnzusammenhang?
5) Was meinst du hier?
6) Sie sahen sich in einer Richtung?

[azadi]

Vielen Dank für die Korrektur

1.What were the main reasons why Britain set out to build the British Empire?
One reason was to become a economic powerThey wanted to create an economy which could compete against other european contries.

2. supermacy - das habe ich einfach reingeschrieben,gehört nicht rein

3.Referring to Darwin's theory they are the superior nation and their job is to well-behaved people from their colony,who were unequal for selfgoverment.
They saw themselves in leadership and wanted to keeping their values and religion.

[Keswick]

Vielen Dank für die Korrektur

1.What were the main reasons why Britain set out to build the British Empire?
One reason was to become an economic power. They wanted to create an economy which could compete against other European countries.

2. supermacy - das habe ich einfach reingeschrieben,gehört nicht rein OK

3.Referring to Darwin's theory they are the superior nation and their job is to* well-behaved people from their colony, who were unequal for selfgoverment. Der letzte unterstrichene Teil macht keinen Sinn und hier (*) fehlt ein Verb.
They saw themselves in leadership and wanted to keeping their values and religion.