Präsentation in Englisch Bitte Helfen

[Svenja09]

Ich muss eine kleine Präsentation in Englisch über den Staat Illinois halten.
Es wäre total lieb, wenn ihr mal über meinen Text drüberscheuen würdet.

Illinois is a US-american state. He lies in the middle america and adjoins on the Michigansee in northeast. The important citys in Illinois are the capital city Springfield, the megacity Chicago which is the third biggest City in the USA, Rockford, Poeria and Aurora. In the history Illinois is related with Abraham Lincoln, because of that Illinois nickname is . „Land of Lincoln“.
Abraham Lincol was the sixteenth US-President. He lives from 1830 until his death in Illinois. Today you can find there his sepulchral.
He abolished the sklavery and he targed the entity (die Einheit) thankless in his city.

There are a lot of sights in Illinois.
1. The Chicago Methodist Church. This is a church with the highest church spire in the world (173 m ).
2. Dana-Thomas House State Historic Site in Springfield. This was established by Frank Lloyd Wright.
3. The lawyer's office from Abraham Lincolns in Sprinfield.
4. Elis Cheesecake World in Chicago. This is the biggest bekery of cheesecakes.


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[schnip]

Ich muss eine kleine Präsentation in Englisch über den Staat Illinois halten.
Es wäre total lieb, wenn ihr mal über meinen Text drüberscheuen würdet.

Illinois is a US-american state. It is located in the middle of North America and adjoins Lake Michigan in the northeast. The important citys in Illinois are the capital city Springfield, the megacity Chicago which is the third biggest City in the USA, Rockford, Poeria and Aurora. In history Illinois is related with Abraham Lincoln, because of that Illinois nickname is . „Land of Lincoln“.
Abraham Lincol was the sixteenth US-President. From year 1830 until his death he lived in Illinois. Today you can find there his grave (sepulchral ist ein Adjektiv laut Wörterbuch).
He abolished slavery and targed the entity (die Einheit) thankless in his city-->was möchtest du damit sagen??.

There are a lot of sights in Illinois.
1. The Chicago Methodist Church. This is the church with the highest church spire in the world (173 m ).
2. Dana-Thomas House State Historic Site in Springfield. This was established by Frank Lloyd Wright.
3. The lawyer's office from Abraham Lincolns in Sprinfield. was meinst du?
4. Elis Cheesecake World in Chicago. This is the biggest bakery of cheesecakes.


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[Svenja09]

Mit dem Satz The lawyer's office from Abraham Lincolns in Sprinfield. meinte ich so ein Büro wo der Präsident früher drin hgearbeitet hat.

Danke aber nochmal

[schnip]

Mit dem Satz The lawyer's office of Abraham Lincoln in Sprinfield. meinte ich so ein Büro wo der Präsident früher drin hgearbeitet hat.

Danke aber nochmal

[Keswick]

Ich habe mir die Freiheit genommen, den Text erneut zu verbessern, da noch einige Fehler uebersehen wurden.

Ich muss eine kleine Präsentation in Englisch über den Staat Illinois halten.
Es wäre total lieb, wenn ihr mal über meinen Text drüberscheuen würdet.

Illinois is a US-American state. It is situated in the middle of America and adjoins on the Lake Michigan in the Northeast. The important cities in Illinois are the capital city Springfield, the megacity Chicago which is the third biggest city in the USA, Rockford, Poeria and Aurora. In the history Illinois is related with Abraham Lincoln, because of whom Illinois received its nickname „Land of Lincoln“.
Abraham Lincol was the sixteenth US-President. He lived in Illinois from 1830 until his death. Today you can find his grave there.
He abolished the slavery and he targed the unity thankless1) in his city.

There are a lot of sights in Illinois.
1. The Chicago Methodist Church. This is a church with the highest church spire in the world (173 m ).
2. Dana-Thomas House State Historic Site in Springfield. It was established by Frank Lloyd Wright.
3. Abraham Lincoln's office in Springfield where he worked as a lawyer.
4. Elis Cheesecake World in Chicago. This is the biggest bakery of cheese cakes.

1) Was willst du hiermit ausdruecken?