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EyeCatcher
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Brauche bitte Hilfe

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Hallo an alle :)

bin neu hier und habe auch schon eine bitte ....
ist dieser kurze brief gut formuliert? über hilfe wäre ich sehr dankbar.

Dear father,

i am very sorry that i left you without to say goodbye. But we fight a lot and i knew no other way.
I went by bus to London and from there to spain. I'm doing very well and I feel very good here.
You know, I always wanted to work as a scuba instructor and in spain i got a job. The job is great. I've already met many people. I am so happy.
Since i'm in spain, i've been thinking a lot. Now i know that you only wanted the best for me. Thank you for that. But I must make my own experiences and learn from them. I hope you understand me.
I apologize that you have heard nothing from me for a long.
Dad, I have put a train ticket to spain with the letter, so you can visit me.

I am very happy when you're here and we can talk about everything.


Love, Angelina




Keswick
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Re: Brauche bitte Hilfe

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EyeCatcher hat geschrieben:Hallo an alle :)

bin neu hier und habe auch schon eine Bitte ....
ist dieser kurze Brief gut formuliert? Ueber Hilfe wäre ich sehr dankbar.

Dear father,

I am very sorry that I left you without saying goodbye. But we fight a lot and I knew no other way.
I went to London by bus and from there to Spain. I'm doing very well and I feel very good here.
You know, I have always wanted to work as a scuba instructor and in Spain I got a job. The job is great. I've already met many people. I am so happy.
Since I've been in Spain, I've been thinking a lot. Now I know that you only wanted the best for me. Thank you for that. But I must make my own experiences and learn from them. I hope you understand me.
I apologize that you have heard nothing from me for a while. (resp. for so long)
Dad, I have enclosed a train ticket to Spain with the letter, so you can visit me.

I am looking forward to having you here so we can talk about everything.


Love, Angelina
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Eigennamen, Staedtenamen, Laendername schreibt man immer gross.
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EyeCatcher
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Registriert: 12. Sep 2009 08:52
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Re: Brauche bitte Hilfe

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vielen vielen dank.du hast mir sehr geholfen.danke :D

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