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CV

Dear parents of xx and xx,

I am interested to work as a nanny for your two little infants xx and xx, as I saw advertised on the website xx.


I am a xx years old german woman and at August xx, 2009 I moved from xx to xx for living and working here.
I did my primary school exam and I am a certified xx with one year working experience.

But also I always enjoyed working with kids and especially babies.



In the holidays of 1996 and 2002 I always took care of the boy Jxx (birth 19xx) from friends. Jxx was a difficult child for his parents, but I had no problems with taking care of him.
I always created new games or activities for him, like playing in the moulding box, or singing songs and I played guitar. Years later he was still glowing from this time.


In the years 19xx-20xx me and two other young woman prepaired and performed one hour for a smaller group of younger kids in the age of 3-14. Every sunday we organised it for the church, with for example creative activities, painting , playing games and reading stories. In the winter we practiced with the kids for learning text to perform the christmas story in the church.


In the summer of 200xx I did an industrial placement for two weeks in the kindergarten xyz in xx, Germany.

In the years 2000-2003 I took care of the boy Txx (birth 19xx) of my aunt xx.

In the evening when she had an appointment, I played with him, I feed him, I swaddled him and when he was tired I took him to his bed and read a story. In the night I slept next to his bed to take care of him.

When he was older I went with him in the garden and we had a picnic, I read with him children's books and we played games. I cooked a meal and feed him or helped him with eating.



So after all it is also a little bid chemistry, but in the case that you like it, I would enjoy having an interview.


Thanking you in anticipation, I remain,

Kind regards,

______________

xx



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CURRICULUM VITAE
Nanny/Babysitter


Objective: Taking care of babies and younger children with
cooking, feeding, creating suitable activities and
reading children 's books and everything desired


Employment History:
19xx, 20xx: In the holidays took care of the boy xyz (birth 19xx)
of a friendly family

19xx-20xx: take care of kids in the age of 3-14
Kirche xx xx(Church in Germany), xyz xyz, Germany

- with two young woman together preparing and perform one hour
in a small group of younger kids every sunday for the church
e.g. with creative activities, painting , playing games, reading stories
- practice with the kids for learning text to perform the christmas story
in the church

Industrial placement
20xx, 2 weeks Kindertagesstätte(kindergarten in Germany) "xyz",
xx x, xyz xyz, Germany
- taking care of 3-5 years old children
- playing, singing, take a walk and eating
- cleaning and preparin of activities like painting or games

19xx- 20xx: took care of the boy xyz (birth xyz) of my aunt in xyz,
Germany

20xx, summer: took care of a 5 years old boy of a former friend in xyz,
Germany

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Driver license: european driver license for passenger car / type B
2001- 2003 driving experiences in Germany & first aid
course
summer 2008