Ich freue mich auf eine Korrektur!

[jen]

Habe diesen Text einmal für mich geschrieben, wäre wirklich toll, wenn mir jemand die Fehler zeigen könnte.
Dafür jetzt schon einmal herzlichen Dank!

Currently I'm working at an office clerk but I would like to study. Before I worked at my present jo I had been self-employed as an clerk. Last year I got my general qualification for university entrance. I did it on a evening school among my work, because I don't like to work in an office anymore. Therefor I had gone four years every day after work to this school. I want to study educatinal studies with a second subject business economics. I have apllied to the university and now I'm waiting for an acceptance. I applied last year too, but I got a refusal. I hope I will get ist this year.


lg jen

[Keswick]

I'm currently working as an office clerk but I would like to study. Before starting my present job I worked as a self-employed clerk. Last year I achieved the general qualification for university entrance. I attended an evening school among my work, because I didn't like working in an office anymore. Therefore I went to school everyday after work for four years. I want to study educational studies with business economics as a second subject. I have applied for the university and now I'm waiting for an acceptance. I applied last year too, but I received a refusal. I hope I will make it this year.

Benutze unbedingt ein Rechtschreibprogramm und achte auf die Satzstellung.

[jen]

Vielen Dank für deine schnelle Antwort!
Und auch für die Ratschläge.

Gruss Jen