Habe den Text Turn-off Switched on our Brains gelesen und muss die Frage beantworten "Do you think that an experiment like that makes sense? How might it influence your life?"
In dem Text geht es um ein Experiment, in dem einer Familie 12 Tage der TV weggenommen wird.
Wenn ihr den Inhalt eines Satzes nicht so treffend findet, bitte ich auch um korrigur.
2. Yes I think an experiment like that makes sense, because a lot of people watch television and they don’t use their spare time for other things. Because of that the twelve-day experiment were a new experience for other families, too. They would learn to live without a TV. On the one side it could happen that they find common ground but on the other hand it could happen that they battel with each other. In my opinion every familie should test a experiment like this.
In my one life i watch TV rarely. I use my spare time for other things. I go dancing or shopping this is more interesting as the programms in the television. But I have to say there are tenses where I watch more than else. For example in the holidays or if I am sick.
Therefore I think the experiment were not very bad for me, but I would try out it.
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Bitte korrigieren !!! ist wichtig
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Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts uebersehen.jojo-maus hat geschrieben:Habe den Text Turn-off Switched on our Brains gelesen und muss die Frage beantworten "Do you think that an experiment like that makes sense? How might it influence your life?"
In dem Text geht es um ein Experiment, in dem einer Familie 12 Tage der TV weggenommen wird.
Wenn ihr den Inhalt eines Satzes nicht so treffend findet, bitte ich auch um Korrektur.
2. Yes I think an experiment like that makes sense, because a lot of people watch television and they don’t use their spare time for other things. Because of that the twelve-day experiment would be a new experience for other families, too. They would learn to live without a TV. On the one hand it could happen that they find common ground but on the other hand it could happen that they fight with each other. In my opinion every family should make an experiment like this.
In my own life I rarely watch TV. I use my spare time for other things. I go dancing or shopping - this is more interesting than the programmes onthetelevision. But I have to say there are periods where I watch more than usual. For example during holidays or if I am sick.
Therefore I think the experiment would not be very bad for me, but I would tryoutit.
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