Ich versuche mein Englisch vor dem Abitur noch ein wenig zu verbessern.... und möchte natürlich auch hier fleißig helfen... wenn vllt jemand über den Text gucken könnte und Verbesserungen anbringen könnte wäre ich dankbar...
The first day I actually started to learn for my A-levels. Beginning with arranging my german literature (the book with my addational material), I started to notice that several parts were missing, which I tried to look for, but rather fast gave up...
Continuing with learning for my English written test, by testing my grammar, what I figured out, was quite good.
At last I started to learn for my maths written test, what discouraged me a bit,... Understanding the relations between vectors was not to difficult,... I understood it, but when it came to refer my just learned to exercises, I failed.
kleiner Blick, ob alles stimmt??
-
- English Legend
- Beiträge: 4800
- Registriert: 30. Jul 2008 11:20
- Muttersprache: Deutsch
- Wohnort: Borough of Gateshead
Re: kleiner Blick, ob alles stimmt??
Hi Princess, dein Text ist an sich nicht falsch (nur ein zwei kleine Dinge), aber ich habe ihn dennoch mal grammatisch und formal etwas umgestellt, damit er weicher und natuerlicher klingt.princess-of-pumpkin.pies hat geschrieben: The first day I actually started to learn for my A-levels. I began with arranging my German literature (the book with my additional material), I noticed that several parts were missing, which I tried to look for, but I gave up rather quickly...
I continued with learning for my English written test, by testing my grammar, what I figured out, was quite good.
At last I started to learn for my maths written test, which discouraged me a bit,... Understanding the relations between vectors was not to difficult,... I understood it, but when it came to refering my just learned to exercises, I failed.
Oh und willkommen auf dem Forum .
Bitte keine Korrektur- / Erklärungsanfragen per PN.
British English (BE) Sprecher.
British English (BE) Sprecher.