Ich muss in der 11ten Klasse in einer Woche ein sehr wichtiges Referat über die Golden Gate bridge in San Francisco halten. Von diesem Referat hängt bei mir einiges ab und so habe ich mir auch sehr viel Mühe beim erstellen gegeben. Da ich mir aber mit der Grammatik u.s.w. nicht 100 % sicher bin wollte ich euch um Hilfe beten und hoffen, dass mir jemand meine Fehler korrigert und sagt, was ich noch ändern sollte!
Hier das Referat:
Wie fandet ihr den Text? Wo sind Fehler? Was würdet ihr verbessern?My presentation is about the Golden Gate bridge in San Francisco. I choose this because I think that it is one of the most wonderful bridges of the world and my uncle gave me an English book from the gift Golden Gate bridge (bei dem fett markierten Text bin ich mir sehr unsicher)!
At the beginning of the 20th century the technology was so far advanced that it was possible to build a bridge from San Fransisco to Marin peninsulaacross the Golden Gate Bay. The problemes were the weather, the fog, the deep water and the danger of earthquakes in the region. The engineer Joseph Strauss had to build a rope bridge because the bay is a shipping aera and that´s the reason why he couldn´t built a pillar in the middle of the river. The construction of the 2.700m long bridge was aprroved in 1924, but they couldn´t start to build before 1933. During construction time 10 building workers died when a scaffold broke and they fell 70 meters down into the water. In the year 1937 the bridge was opened by president Roosevelt. The constructor Jospeh Strauss died one year after the bridge was finished at the age of 68.
The total costs of the bridge was over 37 million dollars. The bridge was finally paid in the year 1971 through the toll charge of the cars. The toll charges have to be paid only on the way into the city by cars. The opposite direction is free. In one day there are driving more than 70 000 cars across the bridge. There are 6 roadways which can be changed acording to the density of the traffic. The paint of the bridge is a special developed colour , International Orange. 5 painters always work on the bridge. They need about one and a half year for the whole paintwork. Than they have to beginn again.
Jumping from the bridge is a rather common method to commit suicide, with about one jump every two weeks, for a total of well over 1,200 suicides, only 26 survived the jump.When the people jump down the bridge they hit the water with 120 km/h and the fall takes 4 seconds.
But for all that I think the bridge is among the most beautiful bridges in the world and it is the landmark of San Fransisco.
Ich sage schonmal 100000 Dank für eure Hilfe und wünsche euch einen schönen Samstag Abend!
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Peter