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[Freddy]

Hallo Leute,

möchte mal hallo sagen und freundlich fragen ob mir einer nicht vieleicht den Text verbessern kann, wäre echt nett da es ein teil meiner Prüfung werden soll.

vielen Dank schon mal im Vorraus Freddy


Die Ärzte

Hello Today I want to talk about my favourite music band which is called
Die Ärzte Die Ärzte that is German for the Doctors. This is a punk band from Berlin, which was formed in 1982 by Farin Urlaub, Bela B. and Sahnie

The Band consists of guitarist Farin Urlaub, means (go on vacation), Drummer Bela B. (also known as Felsenheimer) and bass Player Rodrigo Gonzales. Rod is the newest member, he joined in 1993. All of them write and sing. In 22 years they have released about 20 albums and sold over 23 Million sound carriers.
History
In the first two years they mostly played in clubs in their hometown, Berlin.
In 1983 they won a rock contest in Berlin and with the prize money they recorded their debut EP Uns geht's prima... – Die Ärzte
In 1986 the doctors had a very big crowd of fans; the problem was that the bassist Sahnie was a little bit too proud of himself so he played only for money. But this was too much for Bela and Farin so Sahnie got 10.000DM for leaving the band, so Sahnie had a lot of time for his business studies.
From 1988 to 1993 Bela and Farin went different ways. Bela joined the band King Kong, Farin went to Depp Jones. Both without success.

Comeback
So they decided in 1993 there comeback with bassist Rodrigo Gonzalez.
The Doctors breaks there Own records of the 80’s with the new Bassist.

Since this time there has been nice phrase to say: There are just one god BelaFarinRod.

At September the 8 2001 after 13 years the played another farewell concert in Sylt
But they weren’t brake up for along time.
A reporter asked they, why are you called the Ärzte?
They answered, Bela was in a music store and went to the box with the letter Ä, and there wasn’t any LP in there, so he said to Farin and Sahnie: Let’s find a name with Ä"

[Keswick]

Hallo Leute,

möchte mal Hallo sagen und freundlich fragen, ob mir einer nicht vieleicht den Text verbessern kann, wäre echt nett da es ein Teil meiner Prüfung werden soll.

Vielen Dank schon mal im Voraus. Freddy


Die Ärzte

Hello.
Today I want to talk about my favourite music band which is called
Die Ärzte. Die Ärzte that is German for the Doctors. They are a punk band from Berlin, which was formed in 1982 by Farin Urlaub, Bela B. and Sahnie.

The Band consists of guitarist Farin Urlaub, means (go on vacation), Drummer Bela B. (also known as Felsenheimer) and bass player Rodrigo Gonzales. Rod is the newest member, he joined in 1993. All of them write songs and sing. In 22 years they have released about 20 albums and sold over 23 million sound carriers.

History
In the first two years they mostly played in clubs in their hometown, Berlin.
In 1983 they won a rock contest in Berlin and with the prize money they recorded their debut EP Uns geht's prima... – Die Ärzte.
In 1986 the doctors had a very big crowd of fans; the problem was that the bassist Sahnie was a little bit too proud of himself so he played only for money (inwiefern war er zu stolz? War er eingebildet und hielt sich fuer etwas besseres?). But this was too much for Bela and Farin so Sahnie received 10.000 DM for leaving the band, so Sahnie had a lot of time for his business studies.
From 1988 to 1993 Bela and Farin went separate ways. Bela joined the band King Kong, Farin went to Depp Jones. Both without success.

Comeback
So in 1993 they decided in 1993 to have a comeback with bassist Rodrigo Gonzalez.
The Doctors broke their own records of the 80’s with the new bassist.

Since this time there has been nice phrase to say: There is only one god BelaFarinRod.

On September 8, 2001 after 13 years they played another farewell concert in Sylt.
But they weren’t to break up for along time. Darauf musst du ein wenig naeher eingehen. Ich als Nicht-Fan verstehe hier den Zusammenhang leider nicht.
A reporter asked them, why are you called the Ärzte?
They replied, that Bela was in a music store and went to the box with the letter Ä, and there wasn’t any LP in there, so he said to Farin and Sahnie: Let’s find a name with Ä"

Achte bitte unbedingt auf die Satzzeichen.
Die Frage, wieso sie sich Die Aerzte nennen, wuerde ich an den Anfang setzen, dorthin, wo du den Namen erklaerst.
Du erwaehnst, dass sie ihren eignen Rekord gebrochen haben. Liste doch die ein oder andere sehr erfolgreiche Single auf, damit sich deine Zuhoerer ein Bild machen koennen. Zum Beispiel die Single "Ar***l*ch". War es nicht dieses Lied, das die Aerzte wieder an die Spitze gebracht hat?
Geh ein bisschen mehr auf das Comeback ein, ansonsten ist der Text voellig in Ordnung.