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Sarah-GK
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Hallo Zusammen :) ,


Ich muss zu einem Artikel eine Summary schreiben.

Es wäre sehr nett, wenn diese jemand auf sprachliche / ideomatische (vielleicht auch inhaltliche Fehler) hin untersuchen könnte, da meine Sprache in letzter Zeit nicht mehr so sicher sitzt wie früher.

The article which is written by Amelia Gentleman and published in 'The New York Times' deals with the scandal that the Gap company staffes children under 14 years.
The british newspaper 'The Observer' printed pictures of children who make clothes for Gap in a sweatshirtshop in Dehli. The paper reported that the children were younger than 10 years and embroided decorations on blouses.
Gap's president, Mark Hansen, says that Gap does not accept child labor. He says the vendor from which Gap had ordered the clothes had had a subcontractor in Dehli were children were employed.
He also assuses that the case will be checked.
The nongovernmental organization 'Bachpan Bachao Andolan' attends the children who worked for Gap. They still stay in a children's home.
Mostly the children are from rural areas and come from poor families, they are sold into bonded labor by traffickers or they are sent by their parents who hope their kids will send back extra income.
Approximately 60 million children work for low payment in India.



Ich hoffe, es muss nicht viel verbessert werden.


Liebe Grüße,

Sarah :)




Sarah-GK
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Beiträge: 5
Registriert: 21. Jun 2008 13:26
Muttersprache: Deutsch

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Hallo Zusammen,


Das ist der Link zu dem Artikel:



Liebe Grüße,

Sarah :-)

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