Kann das jemand bitte kurz korrekturlesen?

[simonster]

Hallo!

Wäre superfroh darum, wenn sich jemand kurz diese beiden News durchlesen könnte... ist für eine Bandwebsite.

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We truely hope you enjoyed the Easter Break, relaxing and listening to some good songs. The good kind though.
Are you ready for a secret? The Easter Bunny was too generous this year sending us the ITALIAN SOUND ENGINEER Claudio Lombardi! Oh yes, we are bloody excited!! His skills are well known which makes us feel like small school boys. We are confident to be able to produce a grand EP consisting of 5 songs in the beginning of April. We’ve spent too many hours in our bandrooms experimenting, messing around, creating melodies and after all having fun!


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Well, as you may know life’s not a box of pralines. Due to the narrow minded American Airlines we had to drop our concert at the Miss Earth Switzerland Election. It would’ve been the first gig with almighty Claude as the lead singer. He wasn’t allowed to cancel his flight in order to play in front of you, lads! We’d like to apologize but we decided not to play any concerts without every member of the band – ***** are 5 musicians and we think you deserve all of them. ***** Airline is planning their own take-off after recording the EP! It’s an honour to keep you posted, friends!


Besten Dank und liebe Grüsse,
simonster

[simonster]

Ach büdde

[boert]

Ich zitiere mal eben die Forensatzung, damit du nicht selbst einen Blick reinwerfen musst:

Bitte schreibt nicht einfach Beiträge nur um die Zahl eurer Beiträge zu erhöhen. Wenn ihr zu einem Beitrag nichts zu sagen habt, dann schreibt bitte nicht. Die Anzahl der Beiträge hat nichts mit der Richtigkeit der Antwort eines Mitglieds zu tun.

Habt etwas Geduld und antwortet nicht auf eure eigenen Beiträge mit z. B. „Warum hilft mir keiner“ oder „Ich brauche dringend Hilfe“ etc.

In diesem Sinne.

[Paddy92]

Hallo!

Wäre superfroh darum, wenn sich jemand kurz diese beiden News durchlesen könnte... ist für eine Bandwebsite.

1
We truly hope you enjoyed the Easter Break, relaxing and listening to some good songs. The good kind though.
Are you ready for a secret? The Easter Bunny was too generous this year sending us the ITALIAN SOUND ENGINEER Claudio Lombardi! Oh yes, we are bloody excited!! His skills are well known which makes us feel like small school boys. We are confident to be able to produce a grand EP consisting of 5 songs in the beginning of April. We’ve spent too many hours in our bandroom experimenting, messing around, creating melodies and after all having fun!


2
Well, as you may know life’s not a box of pralines. Due to the narrow minded American Airlines we had to drop our concert at the Miss Earth Switzerland Election. It would’ve been the first gig with almighty Claude as the lead singer. He wasn’t allowed to cancel his flight in order to play in front of you, lads! We’d like to apologize but we decided not to play any concerts without every member of the band – ***** are 5 musicians and we think you deserve all of them. ***** Airline is planning their own take-off after recording the EP! It’s an honor to keep you posted, friends!

so das sind die fehler