Hallo ihr da!
Ich stehe jetz kurz vor der Fachabiturprüfung. In zwei Tagen steht (warscheinlich) die letzte arbeit VOR der prüfung an. Zurzeit stehe ich knapp noch auf einer 3(schwankend zur 4 :/)
Da ich allerdings jedesmal auf der Kippe stand mit den Noten(jedoch nur in englisch)
wollte ich nun mal um die Korrektur meiner Summary bitten.
In der Arbeit kommt Summary und Charakeristik dran. Vll hat jemand tipps für mich?
Nunja.
Hier erstmal meine Summary:(achja es handelt sich um den Minority report von philip k.dick)
Hätte es mir auch gerne einfacher gemacht, aber im Internet gibt es über die Geschichte(nicht vom Film!!) keinerlei englische summary..
Naja deswegen mein Text:
The Minority Report is a short story which is written by Philip K. Dick. The story is about a precrime system and his Founder John Anderton. His Precrime System is a mysterious and secret organisation. In this organisation three mutants, named "precogs", work there. They can look into the future and see what will happen at next. So the precrime System stops murderer before they can kill the victim. At the beginnig John gets a visit from Ed Witwer. John shows him his precrime system and explains him all step by step. Lisa Anderton is Johns loving wife and works at precrime too. Then the unbelieveble will happen: John gets a card with the information that he will kill a person who is named Leopold Kaplan. He shows this card to Lisa and leaves the organisation how fast he can. But he can not leave New York, because unknowing Men bring him to Leopold Kaplan. The Kaplan is the General of the army and he knows all about Johns possible plan. Leopold like to break the Precrime system but John do not know this plan at this time. Leopolds men should bring John back to the Precrime system where he gets his right punishment. But they can not do this contract, because an other unknowing man helps John to flee. This man is Tod fleming. He gives John a new ID and the possiblity to find out more about the reports. John Anderton is not longer the Commissioner of Police. John is now an poor and homeless Electritian whos living in the underground to get more information.
He tries to find out more about the different Reports from Donna, Jerry and Mike by Wally Page. Wally is a worker at the precrime system too. After this Diskussion and the Meeting with Wally John knows what the three reports contained. First he would like to show the right report to Kaplan. But Lisa can not decide that her husband do a great mistake and she wants that John shows this report to Ed witwer. She threats him with her weapon. In this moment fleming come out from his hiding place and helps John. Fleming says John that he can trust in his wife, because he confirms him that Lisa speak the truth about Witwer. He can not believe that Kaplan would like to break his precrime system down. But Anderton decides that he must kill Kaplan to live in "peace". Under the eyes of the puplic John kills Kaplan. At last John and Lisa leave New York, because John expects a punishment. They both leave New York and Witwer is the new police commissioner.
So. das wars.
Würde mich sehr über eine "korrektur" freuen, auch neue anregungen oder tips sind herzlich willkommen. Ich hoffe ich könnt mir noch helfen bevor wir die arbeit schreiben.
Achja eigene Meinung über den gesamten Text sind auch sehr willkommen;)
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