any help

[simon]

hallo,
shurely i need help, i've written this text along time ago, an d now we (my band an me) want to make a record of it. perhabs someone could read the text and tell me what's wrong.

thank you very much
simon

now, the text of a song called "any help"
Strophe 1
You've been too late, you've been too early, the start has not been goodfor anything you need, for anyone you love you would break every door, but your own life, you cannnot manage tell me tell me, if it's getting to hard to carry your bagage
You've been to strong, you've been to weak, your story's been to long You wanted more, you wanted less, your wishes have not been strong the dreams of money, dreams of love, they're all gone away and there's no time, but tell me if you wanna stay

Refrain 1 + 2 + 3 There won't be a time when humans don't need any help to live and it's no crime to cry, if it's getting to hard, and you aren't sure than, it's no crime to knock on somebody's door

Strophe 2 They calling out for help it is not getting well you’re blaming god, you’re blaming devil you’re blaming others for this ravel
You've been to strong, you've been to slender, your story's been to long you wanted more, you wanted less, your wishes have not been strong the dreams of money, dreams of love, they're all gone away and there's no time, but tell me if you wanna stay

[simon]

oja das mit den tippfehlern is so ne sache das stimmt ich tippe zu schnell, aber tell me 2x das kann man ja im songtexten auch im deutschen so machen sag mir sag mir in der art..
danke für die antwort
simon

vielleicht gibt's bei dem außer den tippfehlern noch andere
forgotten (2004):

Strophe 1

not knowing what it is

standing all alone

waiting for a call

that wakes me up



I’m not lonley, no I ain’t

My life is almost perfect

Good times I will have

And home, I am protected



Refrain 1 + 4
but through all the time, you see

I have forgotten

What I’m on this planet for

And why I’m alive

(What do I live for)


Strophe 2
can you explain why I laugh

can you explain why I cry

sometimes I’m feeling weak

I’m not able to tell to you why



No, I’m still okay

No, I am alright

It’s just another pothole

in my road of life



Refrain 2
and sometimes I ask myself

if I ever knew

what this life was giving me for

what I have to do

what I am living for



Refrain 3
sometimes I think that we

that we’re always searching

for tasks and problems

that we can handle everyday anew