someone straighten out my text?

[satropa]

hello
I had to translate e e-mail for my boyfriend. Is there anyone who would correct it for me?
thanks ahead

Here it comes:

Holà,

The label Psychedelic-System is purposed to realise the first album of GOE.
GOE is a swiss guy, who produces FULLON-PSYTRANCE, straight forward, mainly melodious, diversified and very danceable within 144 to 146 bpm.
Certainly we rely on distributors like you and we would be pleased to collaborate with your company.

The tracks are ready, but not mastered and pressed yet. Because GOE is for the month of June hardly reachable because of a compulsory service in the swiss Army, the release is planned for the end of July.

How it looks so far, we will responsible for the compilation, the organisation, the mastering, the coverdesign, the cd-print and the promotion.

In this context we are interested in what we would have to come up with and wich abilities you have.

For example on wich terms you collaborate:
- How far has the product to be progressed, that you act as a distributionpartner?
- Would you wish a exlusive distribution (country-specific) or do you distribute non exclsuive as well?
- How are you callculating your gains?

Wich service you perform?
- In wich countrys are you distributing?
- Have you got the possibility to sell online?
- Do deliver the shops directly?
- How big is your targed audience?
- How much of the promotion and advertising do you assume?

They way you approach
- Wich number of each production lot are you buying for distribution?
- Where are your prices for one CD ranged?
- Would you wish to press the CD as well?

Anyway, we appreciate any Feedback.

Sincerely
Lukas - alias GOE and Team

[satropa]

hello?? Nobody able to go over my text ???

[rgriscom]

Holà,

Psychedelic-System's purpose as a record label is to realise the first album of GOE.
GOE is a swiss guy, who produced "FULLON-PSYTRANCE", a straight forward, mainly melodic, diverse and very danceable CD/Album/Record within 144 to 146 bpm.
Certainly we rely on distributors like you and we would be pleased to collaborate with your company.

The tracks are ready, but not mastered or pressed yet. GOE will be hard to reach during the month of June because of a compulsory service in the swiss Army, so the release is planned for the end of July.

How it looks so far, we will responsible for the compilation, the organisation, the mastering, the coverdesign, the cd-print and the promotion.

In this context we are interested in what we would have to do and what you can do for us.

For example on which terms you collaborate:
- How far does the product have to be completed, for you to act as a distribution partner?
- Would you wish an exlusive distribution (country-specific) or do you distribute non-exclusive as well?
- How do you calculate your gains?

Which services do you perform?
- In which countries do you distribute?
- Do you have the ability to sell online?
- Do you deliver to the shops directly?
- How big is your target audience?
- How much of the promotion and advertising do you assume?

Your approach:
- How much of each production lot are you buying for distribution?
- What are your prices for one CD?
- Would you wish to press the CD as well?

We appreciate any Feedback.

Sincerely,
Lukas - alias GOE and Team



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Hope that helps you!
Good luck with your new CD!



-rgriscom