Read my stories/ let's talk English

[Constance]

Hey Everyone!

My name is Melanie and I come from Cologne in the west of Germany. I did live in California for a while but I feel I've lost a lot of my English. Now I'm trying to revive scraps of it by writing short stories. Is there a kind person who would be willing to take a look at them? This is your chance to criticize, don't miss it!
If you are interested in helping me or just talking a bit of English, email me!

Thanks a lot in advance- Melanie

[Rinoa89]

Hey Everyone!

My name is Melanie and I come from Cologne in the west of Germany. I did live in California for a while but I feel I've lost a lot of my English. Now I'm trying to revive scraps of it by writing short stories. Is there a kind person who would be willing to take a look at them? This is your chance to criticize, don't miss it!
If you are interested in helping me or just talking a bit of English, email me!

Thanks a lot in advance- Melanie

I would be willing to look at them, because I too love to write. Oh, but most importantly, I'm a native English speaker. But I need your e-mail address

[Constance]

Hi. Sorry you guys. I did think I had entered my email address in my profile but apparently that was just for the registration.

Thanks again and ttyl, Melanie