Correction

[Tobi252]

HI, It would be nice of you when you can correct my grammar and expecially my eypression. Thanks
Ps: I need this correction today so please correct it immediately.

Will, who is one of the main characters of the story „about a boy“ by Nick Hornby, is a 36 year old man who lives in London. It seems that he isn´t really grown up yet and he doesn´t take life very serious. He doesn´t work and nevertheless he earns a lot of money. Besides he isn´t the family guy
because he doesn´t want to get married or to get children. Will is more the individual and selfish guy who wants to live his own life and doesn´t want to waste thoughts of other problems not to mention be responsible for them. According to the exposition of his character in the second chapter
he cares very much for his appearance. Expansive clothes and haircuts let him think he impresses people and specifically women makes him interesting for them. Will thinks of himself he´s very cool, a great, good looking and successful guy. This is proven for him by a questionnaire in a magazine, the result of which says that Will is even sub-zero. He is also very proud of his way of life and of what he is doing like listening to HipHop music or not having to work for his money. In his opinion that is what women like.


Marcus is a twelve year old boy who lives alone with his mother Fiona in London.
His mother tells him what he has to wear and which kind of movies he should watching to, which things he should eat and so on. She thinks that she knows what is good for her son and she doesn't allow him to make his own decisions.

[Manhattan]

Hi Tobi

Ich wollt dir eigentlich nur so viel sagen, dass das vielleicht ein bisschen spät ist Meinst du nicht auch? Vielleicht hast du Glück und es kommt noch jemand der Zeit hat - aber ansonsten, falls es nichts wird: Komm doch einfach bitte früher mit sowas - danke

Manhattan

[Tobi252]

Ja, damit hast du wohl recht, aber ich bin leider so spät erst nach Hause gekommen und konnte dementsprechend spät erst meine Hausaufgaben machen. Demnächst werde ich aber versuchen, meine Texte früher ins Forum zu stellen.