Brauch ganz, ganz dringend hilfe..

[sindyy]

Kann sich den Text vielleicht jemand ganz kurz durchlesen und mir die Fehler sagen? Danke, danke =))

Migration

Migration is ubiquitous. In Gb live lots of people from different countries and so there are also different cultures.
Most of them are from India, Bangladesh and Pakistan.
They give up their old life and move to another country.
Reasons to emigrate are a civil war or the big unemployment.
Abroad they can earn more money and so they can offer their children a better future.
Another reason to come to Gb is a political or religious conflict in your own country.
They expect a better job and a higher living standard, but the situation for immigrantes is very tough.
Lots of people are rasistic and malicious and even the government tread immigrants very bad.
Instead of a better and easier life they have lots of obstacles.

[MLS]

Ich würde den Text an einigen Stellen ändern, da nicht immer klar ist, auf was sich die nachfolgenden Sätze beziehen.
Andere Dinge klingen für mich persönlich besser. Das heißt nicht, dass es vorher unbedingt falsch war oder jetzt perfekt ist. Ich hoffe trotzdem, dass ich etwas helfen konnte.

Migration is ubiquitous. In GB live a lot of people from different countries and therefore there are different cultures as well.
Most of them are from India, Bangladesh and Pakistan.
They give up their old life and move to another country.
Reasons to emigrate are civil wars or the big unemployment.
Abroad the emigrants can earn more money and so they can offer their children a better future.
Another reason to migrate to GB is a political or religious conflict in their own country.
They expect a better job and a higher living standard, but the situation for immigrantes is very tough.
Lots of people are rasistic and malicious and even the government treats immigrants very bad so that they have to handle a lot of obstacles instead of living a better life.