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[Darkmaster]

Hi
Cih wollte mal fragen ob sich jemand mal meinen Englischtext anschauen kann. Es wäre sehr wichtig denn es ist die einführung von meibem referrat das ich am 13.12 halten muss. Falls mir hier niemand helfen kann bitte ich um links die mir helfen könnten. Nur die grammatik alles anderre is egal!
Danke schon mal im vorraus!
mfg Darkmaster

Hello my special topic is PC-hardware. The notion Hardware covers all visible parts of PC, for example the hard-disk. The opposite of hardware is software. It covers all programmes and driver. While the hardware is made mechanical is the software made virtually or programmed. There are five parts which are essential for a PC. When one of this is loosing, the computer doesn’t work. The first is the motherboard. On the motherboard would be all parts of the PC connected and configured. The second is the power supply unit that all components provide with current. The third part is the processor it takes over the computing power from the computer. The fourth part is the Ram it is the flighty memory of the PC. The last part is the hard-disk. On this can you save all dates and programs. Important is the separate graphic controller for costly graphics and pictures, it’s very important for games. When you want to copy dates from CD or DVD on your hard-disk you need a CD\DVD-drive and when you want to copy dates from hard-disk to CD\DVD you need a CD\DVD-burner. When a few PCs will be connected you need a network controller. You need a sound controller when you want to hear some sounds. For every component you have to install a special driver. The Hardware will improve and develop very fast. The games and programs need always more computing power (better processor) and better graphic controller. To have a high-performance PC you should rearm your PC or buy a new PC. When you rearm your PC you must exchange only the motherboard, the processor and the graphic controller sometimes the power supply unit, too. The other parts are up-to-date. So you have a new PC for a few euros.
I am finished. Thank you for listening.

[licorice_lilly]

hallo... ich hoffe du kommst damit klar.... nur ein vorschlag...

Hello! My special topic is PC-hardware. The term Hardware denotes all physical parts of a PC. In addition to hardware, a PC uses software. The term software refers to all programmes and drivers used to operate the PC.
There are five different hardware components that are essential to run a PC. The first is the motherboard. On the motherboard all parts of the PC are connected and configured. The second part is the power supply unit that powers all components. The third part is the processor. The processor is responsible for the computing power of the computer. The fourth part is the RAM (Random Access Memory). It is the temporary memory of the PC. The last part is the hard disk. All kind of data and programs are stored on the hard disk. If one of these components is missing, the computer won’t work.
It is important to have a separate graphic controller for higher quality graphics and pictures. This is also very important if you want to play games on your computer. When you want to copy data from CD or DVD on your hard disk you need a CD\DVD-drive and when you want to copy data from hard disk to CD\DVD you need a CD\DVD-burner. To connect several PCs you need a network controller. To be able to hear sounds you need a sound controller. For every component you have to install a special driver. As technology advances and develops very fast, the games and programs need more computing power (better processor) and a more powerful graphic controller. In order to have a high-performance PC you should upgrade your PC or buy a new one. When you upgrade your PC you only need to change the motherboard, the processor and the graphic controller, sometimes the power supply unit, as well. The other parts don’t need to be replaced. That way you have a new PC for less money.
I am finished. Thank you for listening.

[Darkmaster]

Danke das du dir zeit genommen hast!Hilft mir aufjedenfall weiter!
Also nochmals danke jetzt wirds vielleicht mal was^^

mfg Darkmaster