Moinsen! Here I ´am rocking like a hurricane!

[photografic101]

Hello...
My schooltime is many years ago also the English lesson received finally.

And now I´m searching for penpals of all over the world. My first name is Tanja and I am 26 years old. Unfortunately I become in 55 minutes already again a year older. Since seven years I live in Bremen but my homeland is Oldenburg..

It does me for you sorrow, for my English is really very bad. Hopefully I do not torment you all too very.

I became on this forum attentive because I would like to improve my English.

In my leisure time, I photograph gladly. To mean sporting activities count: Go bicycle and the shooting.

And I hear gladly the music for example of Depeche Mode or Apoptygma Berzerk or other good music.

If I somewhat incorrectly should write, I look forward to a correction.

Now knows it´s already a couple of information about me.

Nice greetings

[mimarinX]

Hello Tanja!

Happy belated birthday!!


My English needs some improvement, too..... so I'm not quite the right person to correct your English.....
But since nobody else is doing it, I'll give it a try... to put it in a very official way:
no responsibility is taken for the correctness of this informations

... also the English lesson received finally.

No idea how to correct this one... but it sounds very strange....

And now I´m searching for penpals of all over the world.

from

Unfortunately I become in 55 minutes already again a year older.

Unfortunately I will grow older another year in 55 minutes.
<<Don't know if that is correct, but at least it is better than your sentence... Sorry... no offence!!!

Since seven years I live in Bremen but my homeland is Oldenburg..

I live in Bremen for seven years now but .......
since is a point in time.... f.e. : I live in Bremen since 1998.

It does me for you sorrow, for my English is really very bad. Hopefully I do not torment you all too very.

I feel sorry for you, because...... (or: I pity you, because.....)
.....too much. (not very)

I became on this forum attentive because I would like to improve my English.

I came to this forum ...... (be careful with "come" and "become"!!! Total different meanings!!) attentive...(have no idea if that is correct, but it sounds strange... and it doesn't make much sense to me...
I would suggest :"I come to this forum because I would like to improve my English"

And now I have tortured you enough!!!!!
I have to go now.....
Just one more time.... I MEAN NO HARM!!! Just trying to help. Hope you won't get mad at me, because I corrected your sentences...

And by the way.....
I'm 36 years old and I come originally from Osnabrueck.....

Best wishes and hope to hear from you soon!!!!!
I have more time to write on Sunday night..... if you answer to this I will reply!!!!
byebye
mimarinX