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A lot of young peoplehave high-pressure parents. But does it really make sence?
On the on hand the parents are able to control their children. Because they want them to get good marks and a good graduation. They just want the best for their children. But on the other hand the young people have to learn to do their things alone without the help of their parents. Because later in their life they will not be able to ask their parents in every single situation. Besides they will have to manage their own family. All in all everyone has to decide on his own if it is better to have parents, who pu their children under pressure.
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