Betty White - no homework

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ibri
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Betty White - no homework

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Betty White had a remarkable career. In fact, no one has a longer run on TY. In 1939, White was singing on a broadcast by an expermental channel. She was the star of a famous sitcom and several game shows. In the 1970s, she joined the most popular American TV show called The Mary Tyler Moore Show. Afterwards she had another hughe-running TV show, The Golden Girls. Her charm was her nice demeanor. That seemed almost goody-goody, as she suprised you with a naughty joke. Actually, she had done it all. However, in her 80s she became a cult hero in the US. It has something to do with Facebook. a 29-year-old fan creted a petition on Facebook: Betty white for SNL! it was a great publicity for both White and SNL. white went on the show and it was great for kids a quater of her age to like White.

I would like you to correct my mistakes, please! :-)




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Re: Betty White - no homework

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ibri hat geschrieben:Betty White had a remarkable career. In fact, no one has ever had a longer run on TV. In 1939, White's singing was being broadcasted by an experimental channel. She was the star of a famous sitcom and several game shows. In the 1970s, she joined the most popular American TV show called The Mary Tyler Moore Show. Afterwards she starred in another long-running TV show, "The Golden Girls." Her charm was her nice demeanor. That seemed almost goody-goody, as she suprised you with a naughty joke. Actually, she had done it all. However, in her 80s she became a cult hero in the US, thanks to Facebook. A 29-year-old fan created a petition on Facebook: "Betty white for SNL!" It was ["a" wegnehmen] great publicity for both White and SNL. White went on the show and garnered a lot of praise from viewers a quarter her age.

I would like you to correct my mistakes, please! :-)
Da sie schon über 80 ist, sind die Fans, die "a quarter her age" sind, über 20, nicht wahr? Keine "Kinder."
(bin für jegliche Korrektur meines Deutsch dankbar)

ibri
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Re: Betty White - no homework

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Ups. :-) Vielen Dank! :)

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