The Commonwealth of Nations - no homework

[ibri]

The Commonwealth of Nations is the organisation of former British colonies - it represents 54 countries and about a third of the world's population. The memebers use English as their first or second language and the Westminster parlamentary system. Cricket and rugby create strong bonds. Ireland left the Commonwealth - because of ideological differences - in 1948. Mugabe pulled Zimbabwe out of the Commonwealth. Strangely, Yemen, Sudan, Madagaska and Algeria would like to join. It seems that France did try to join in the 1950s. Britain did not allow this, so Germany and France found the EU. The boss of the Commonwealth is Queen Elizabeth II. and not presidents and ministers of members. The organization has long supported free trade, but now it tries to share benefits of globalization more fairly.

Correct mistakes and comment on the text, please. It is no homework.

[joy]

The Commonwealth of Nations is the organisation of former British colonies - it comprises 54 countries and about a third of the world's population. The members use English as their first or second language and the Westminster parliamentary system. Cricket and rugby create strong bonds. Ireland left the Commonwealth - because of ideological differences - in 1948. Mugabe pulled Zimbabwe out of the Commonwealth. Strangely, Yemen, Sudan, Madagascarand Algeria would like to join. It seems that France did try to join in the 1950s. Britain did not allow this, so Germany and France foundedthe EU.Headof the Commonwealth is Queen Elizabeth II(kein Punkt)and not presidents and ministers of members. The organisation has long supported free tradefor a long time, but now it tries to share benefits of globalization more fairly.(“organization” ist auch richtig, aber ich würde immer die gleiche Variante nehmen) – (Zeitangaben, siehe long supported, kommen an den Anfang oder am Ende des (Teil-)Satzes.)Correct mistakes and comment on the text, please.It is no homework.

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