A good week for America's and Europe's economy

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ibri
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A good week for America's and Europe's economy

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Looking back on this week, there is no denying that we got positive news on the most politically charged topic - the debt crises of America and Europe. The first good news is that America's economy is in good shape. The second one is that the politicans of both economys are exploring new solutions so that policy errors are unlikely. However, this recovery might stay on only for a short period of time. Especially since we were dissapointed before.

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Re: A good week for America's and Europe's economy

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ibri hat geschrieben:Looking back on this week, there is no denying that we have received positive news on the most politically charged topic - the debt crises of America and Europe. The first good news is that America's economy is in good shape. The second one is that the politicans of both economies are exploring new solutions so that policy errors are unlikely. However, this recovery might stay on only for a short period of time. Especially since we were disappointed before.

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Keswick hat geschrieben:
ibri hat geschrieben: The second one is that the politicians of both economies are exploring new solutions so that policy errors are unlikely.
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Re: A good week for America's and Europe's economy

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Don't you want to comment on the topic?

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Re: A good week for America's and Europe's economy

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Well we would, but you haven't really given us any good arguments to comment on. You stated facts that we could have read in any newspaper, and to be honest if you want to start a discussion you should give some arguments first to start a discussion with and not wait for other people to start it.
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ibri hat geschrieben:Looking back on this week, there is no denying that we have received positive news on the most politically charged topic - the debt crises of America and Europe.

The first good news is that America's economy is in good shape. :lol: :lol:

The second one is that politicians of both economies are exploring new solutions :shock:
so that policy errors are unlikely. :D :D

However, this recovery might last only for a short period of time.
Especially since we were disappointed before.

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