Hi,
kann mir jemand den text bitte grob korrigieren?!
Ich habe mit dem freien schreiben probleme.
About the sport in Ireland
In the last years the successes of Ireland in the worldsport were unproportional high in comprehension with the populationnumber.
Ireland had good results by the Olympic Games.
The favourite sportkinds in Ireland are traditional ballgames like Gaelic Football, Hurling (thats something like hockey) and Camogie (that´s Hurling for women).
Those games are nearly only played in Ireland.
The high points are the endgames of them, which takes place in September in the Croke Park in Dublin.
Football is playing in all age groups.
Ireland is a very good place for sportkinds (im Freien: was heißt das?) like hunting, shooting, fishing but also riding.
Because of the 3000 km large coasts you can also sail or paddle.
It gives more than 400 golf course over the land placed.
The Murphy´s Irish Open and the Smurfit European Open are the biggest Irish organizisations of the international golfgame.
In the last years Ireland was hostess of many sportgivings. The biggest one was the Organizisation of the Special Olympics in June 2003.
Wie gesagt, es muss nicht zu 100% richtig sein, wenn ihr korrigiert.
Es sollte nur weniger fehler enthalten als jetzt!
Wenn ihr mir helfen könnt, tut das bitte!...vorallem mit den prepositionen hab ich probleme.
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Gast
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Ich war ziemlich kleinlich, aber ich wollte alles ansprechen, was mir fraglich erschein. Keine GewaehrIsi hat geschrieben: About [strike]the[/strike] sport in Ireland
In the last years the successes of Ireland in [strike]the worldsport[/strike] international sports were unproportionally high in [strike]comprehension with [/strike] relation to [strike]the [/strike](besser: its) population size/number.
Ireland had good results [strike]by[/strike]at the Olympic Games.
[strike]The[/strike]Some of the favourite sports[strike]kinds[/strike] in Ireland are traditional ballgames like Gaelic Football, Hurling (thats something like hockey) and Camogie (that´s Hurling for women).
Those games are [strike]nearly[/strike] almost [strike]only[/strike] exclusively played in Ireland.
The high points (je nachdem was du sagen willst waere auch highlight moeglich) are the [strike]endgames of them[/strike] (bin nicht ganz sicher, aber entweder playoffs oder finals), which take[strike]s[/strike] place in September in/at [strike]the [/strike]Croke Park in Dublin.
Football is play[strike]ing[/strike]ed in all age groups.
Ireland is a very good place for outdoor sport[strike]kinds [/strike]s (im Freien: was heißt das - outdoors) like hunting, shooting, fishing but also riding.
Because of the (oder besser [strike]Ireland's[/strike]) 3000 km[strike] large coasts[/strike] (besser: of coast line) you can also sail or paddle.
[strike]It gives[/strike]There are more than 400 golf courses all over the island [strike]placed[/strike].
The Murphy´s Irish Open and the Smurfit European Open are the biggest Irish organizisations [strike]of[/strike]in [strike] the[/strike] international golf.
In the last years Ireland was host[strike]ess[/strike] of many sport [strike]givings[/strike] events . The biggest one was the Organizisation of the Special Olympics in June 2003.
