FC Barcelona - Dringende Korrektur - :)

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Full Name : FC Barcelona
Place : Barcelona
Incorparated : 29 - November - 1899
CLub Colors : Blue Carmine
Stadion : Camp Nou (98.600)
President : Joan Laporta
Trainer : Josep Guardiola (EX Player of Barcelona)
Homepage http://www.fcbarcelona.cat
League Primera División 2009/10 1. Place
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Attention please! I wish today presents a world famous football-club.
The FC Barcelona is a football-club from the Catalan area of Spain.
The abbreviation of this team is " Barca " and they plays the home matches in the stadion of Camp Nou , this stadion had 98.600 spectators place and is one of the greatest stadions in europe.
With Real Madrid and Atletic Bilbao is the FC Barcelona the sole club they have never been descended in the Spanish league Primera Division.
In the last time owned FC Barcelona the Spanish League, in the last 6 years 4 wins in the championship.
The endless ranking of UEFA say that the FC Barcelona in the category european cup the best team is.
With a equity of 948 Million Euro is the FC Barcelona one of the most expensive teams of the world.
With a yearly sales of 308.8 Million Euro is that Team on rank 3.
But how the large majority is too FC Barcelona indebted.
Youth work
The FC Barcelona subsists several youth camps in the world. Of these is the famoust and biggest the La Masia in Barcelona . The youth work of FC Barcelona ist generally very remarkable, training session is short passes and technique construed and less on balance or strength, how in other teams.
The work with ball "pure technique" will be precisely trains.
Fast play in tought areas, related with technique abilitys is for this team very important.
The fantastic youth work of Barcelona can easy to realize when you see important players how Andres Iniesta, Xavi and Lionel Messi.

Now, i wish present the best football player at the moment in the world.
He is Lionel Messi.
Lionel Andres Messi (born 24.June.1987 in Rosario in Argentina) he is a argentinian nationalplayer and plays at the moment for FC Barcelona.
He chosen became the best player price of the year 2009 in europe and in the world.
He qualifies as a most talented and best football players in the history of football and he will seen as a successor of Diego Armando Maradona.
Style of play
Messi is a brilliant player, he can plays by high tempo and can smoothly to control the ball.He decreed a high football intelligence and overview on the football field.His spectacular solo playing makes him to fearest player in the Spanish league Primera Division.As big ability with his dribblings and high tempo above all worldclass technique.Although he plays with the left foot, he can plays too in the centre and on the right wing. His versatility allowed a tactical interplay with a player in the centre.

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