
Thanks for correcting my sentences.

Sinner hat geschrieben:I'am a new member and the reason why I registered here is that I would like to practice my English.
In my opinion English is a language you can use in nearly every situation.
Furthermore, English is also a global language and therefore I would like to learn it.![]()
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
andy55 hat geschrieben:Hello and welcome!
Where are you from exactly?
In my view it is better to say: However
It is my opinion that English is certainly the most important lingua franca.
You are absolutely right, more than 300 million people all over the world speak English.
It is certainly the most commonly spoken language all over the world when you combine native and non-native speakers.
Tell us a little bit more about you?
What are you doing, or what is your profession?
First of all you didn't say "professional" earlier. You used the word "profession" correctly.andy55 hat geschrieben:Is "professional" even the correct translation, because this word means a job which requires an academic degree?
In case I am a craftsman, a cashier, a salesman or something similar what I ought to call my "job"?
Am I expressing myself correctly?
"target" ist das Ziel, das man beim Schießen anvisiert.Mel_B hat geschrieben:Hi Sinner!
What did you do before you had this bad accident?
The goal/aim/plan to be a policeman ist very interessting. What was your motivation?
If the question is not too personal, I would like to ask you what injuries you hadhave?
Best wishes
Melanie
Mel_B hat geschrieben: The goal/aim/plan to be a policeman is very interesting.
Hey Sinner, you didn't ask me personally, of course, but I hope I might answer the question anyway. I'm an English teacher. Day in, day out, I explain how to use this wonderful language. And I can't stop myself, it seems, even in my spare time...Sinner hat geschrieben: Hey Sinner, wonderful to have you here after all you've been through! And great idea to improve your English, I would say, because it's the best language there is!!!
May I correct your mistakes?!
Before the accidentis happend, I did a voluntary social year in a school for mentally/ and physically handicapped pupils. After I had done the first half, the accidentishappened. It was a carbon monoxide poisoning that I got in the house of my (ex) girlfriend. First, I was in a coma for 4-5 weeks. The accident caused, among other things, a heart attack, a complete destruction of muscles and nerves, kidney failure, braindamage, paralysis of legs and arms, epilepsy, pancreatitis, damages to my autonomous nervous system and high blood pressure. And on top of that, I became infected with the MRSA virus. For this list, I had to look into my medical file.![]()
My motivation to become a policeman was my father. He is a policeman and this was the reason why Ihavechose this profession. But I will wait and see what kind of job opportunities will come along in the next "years".
And what are your jobs?![]()
Best regards!!!