Bei dem ersten Text würde ich mich freun wenn ihr mir eine Vorlage schreiben könntet das ich mich mit dieser Hilfe an den 2ten Text ransetzen kann und ihn wohlmöglich darauf aufbauend gestalten kann.
Also hier der Text (Habe mir die Mühe gemacht und den Text abgetippt da ich echt verzweifelt bin):
Now I am not sure. I was on the train last Saturday at about 4 o’clock in the afternoon. A woman got on at the next station and I noticed her right away. She was well-dressed, about forty, young-looking and had dark hair with highlights. She sat down opposite a young guy, who had a denim jacket. His sneakers and his T-shirt were dirty. The first thing I heard the woman say was, “do you think you could take your feet off the seat, please? They are touching my jacket.” The guy stood up really quickly. “who do you thing you are?” he shouted.” Do you own this train, or something?” “I´m only asking you to move your feet’s, “the woman said. She kept her voice very clam. He shouted into her face, “If you make me angry, you will be in trouble?” He was really red in the face and I think he was a bit drunk. Suddenly booth of them stood up and the guy looked very angry. I can remember thinking, “Oh, no, something terrible is going to happen!” The other passengers all looked away or won at their newspapers. If I hadn’t seen so embarrassed I would have done something. Instead I looked out of the windows and concentrated on the Chicago subways passing by. Suddenly the drunken guy pushed the woman hard. She let out a cry, fell backwards onto the seat and hit her head against the window as she fell. Still nobody did anything. The train pulled into the next station and the drunken guy got off, in fact he almost fell off, and walked away. The woman got off, too, holding her hand to her head. I could see the pain on her face as she stared back at the other passengers though the window, wide-eyed. The look on her face said she couldn’t believe what she had just experienced. I shouldn’t have … happen. I know what I did wasn’t right. If I had said something to that drunk, perhaps some other passengers would have helped, too. I’m sure that the guy wouldn’t have pushed her. But I was scared to get involved in their problem. I felt really bad when I got off the train and I still feel bad today. Why haven’t we learned to show more cowage? I’m not a kind any more, so what was I scared off? I can’t get it off my mind, I find myself thinking about it all day. I wonder how many other young people have had a similar experience.
Für die Characterization habe ich mir diese Merkmale notiert:
well-dressed; about forty; young-looking;
Dark hair with highlights
Denim jacket; ripped, scruffy denim jeans;
Dirty sneakers; dirty T-shirt
She wanted the young man to take his feet
off the seat. His sneakers were dirty and
they were touching her jacket.
He got very angry and shouted at her.
The passengers looked away or down at their
newspapers and nobody did anything.
Würde mich echt über eure antworten/Tipps/Characterizations & Summarys freuen!
Ihr würdet mir echt helfen da ich nur noch bis morgen Zeit hab bei meiner Lehrerin fragen zu stellen und das bis dahin fertig sein muss.
