Hello!Name:Ömer, German(Turk)

[Ömer]

Hello,

My name is Ömer and i come from Germany. I am Turk, because
my parents comes from Turkey. I think, they live in Germany for 20years.
But i have been born here in Germany, so you can say that I am German too.
I am 16 years old and live in Hannover.
My teacher said to me that I have a big problem with the english speech.
I bought me some englisch books, but to have contact with an penfriend is
different. I think its better.

When s.o. wants to contact me, please send me a message.

Greetings,
Ömer

[Duckduck]

Hello,

My name is Ömer and I come from Germany. I am Turkish, because
my parents comes from Turkey. I think, they have been living in Germany for 20 years.
But I was born here in Germany, so you can say that I am German too.
I am 16 years old and live in Hannover.
My teacher tells me that I have a big problem with the English language.
I bought me some Englisch books, but to have contact with an penfriend is
different. I think it's better.

When (hier besser: If) s.o. wants to contact me, please send me a message.

Greetings,
Ömer

Hi Ömer and welcome to the forum.

Well, I think your English is not all that bad, though of course there are some mistakes... But it's not hopeless!

My advice: read and write. You can post little texts and we will correct them, you can ask questions and we will answer them, you can do exercises and have them corrected, whatever you like. I'm sure, it will do your English a world of good.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Ömer]

ok, I try to do that!

But I dont know what to write about.
About my life or some other stuff?

Greetings,
Ömer

[Duckduck]

Hi Ömer,
well, actually you can write about whatever you like. Just don't get too personal and don't tell us all your secrets. You could write about your family or your last holidays or your school or your hobbies or about films you like or books you read...

It's just important that you try to think up a little text and practice expressing yourself in English. Ten sentences are OK for the beginning. And just try not to be too complicated. Don't translate your German sentences into English. Keep it simple, as if you were talking to a child. That's the way to start.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Ömer]

Ok, then let´s go!

I tell you about today:

Today I woke up at 3°o clock in the night, because I had a slight headache.
I tried to sleep, but there was noway, so got into the kitchen and ate some banane.
By the way I resolved an Aspirin Tablet into a cup of water. After I have drunken the
solution, I got into bed. I felt better and felt into dreams. When I woked up again, it was half
past seven, so I took my school bag and went to the bus stop. In the school I had English
lesson firstly. After the grave lesson I had to write the English Test. It was very hard!
Finally, I had one and a half hour art. That was very easy.
At home I had lunch and watched TV. Maybe I will go to a party this night.

Ich wollt eigentlich schreiben, dass ich die Englischarbeit nachgeschrieben hatte, wusste aber nicht
wie ich es ausdrücken könnte.

Euch noch einen schönen Abend!

[Duckduck]

Ok, then let's go!

I'd like to tell you about today:

Today I woke up at 3 o'clock in the night, because I had a slight headache.
I tried to go back to sleep, but I couldn't, so I went into the kitchen and ate a banana.
Meanwhile I dissolved an Aspirin Tablet into a cup of water. After drinking the
solution, I got back to bed. I felt better and fell asleep. When I woked up again, it was half past seven, so I took my school bag and went to the bus stop. My first lesson was English. After the grave (ich weiß hier nicht, was Du sagen willst?) lesson I had to write an English test, which I had missed before. It was very hard!
Finally, I had one and a half hours art. That was very easy.
At home I had lunch and watched TV. Maybe I will go to a party tonight.

Euch noch einen schönen Abend!

Hi Ömer,
not quite perfect but with a little practice...
If there are any questions concerning my corrections, don't hesitate to ask. I would recommend posting the next text in "Sätze Text Essays Comment", OK?

Well done,
don't give up!

Duckduck

[Ömer]

Hello,

Sorry, I couldn´t write back, because I had "Praktikum" for two weeks.
But I can tell you how it was.
This two weeks were very wonderful! I did my Praktikum in a Fitness-Centre.
Most people think, that I cant learn s.th. there and I would just work out, but its
wrong. Firstly I tell you s.th. about the personal(staff members). They were 5 men(also jetzt nicht männer). Three men and two women. One of the men is the club manager, so he is the
boss. One man is a student and the other one is a trainer. The women were both trainers.
They were all very friendly. They explained me all about marketing, advertisment and about the
work-out in a gym and when I done my job, I could work out to no purpose.
I liked my "Praktikum" very much and now I know where my career is!


Greetings
Ömer

[Duckduck]

Sorry, I couldn't write back earlier, but I served an internship for two weeks.
But I can tell you what it was like.
These two weeks were very wonderful! I interned at a fitness studio.
Most people think, that you can't learn anything there except working out. But that is wrong. Firstly I'd like to tell you something about the staff members. There are 5 persons working there: three men and two women. One of the men is the club manager, so he is the
boss. The second one is a student and the third one is a trainer. Both women are trainers.
They were all very friendly. They explained a lot to me: about marketing, advertisement and about working out in a gym. After the job, I was allowed to work out sinnlos???.
I enjoyed my internship very much and now I know what career to choose!

Sorry it took me so long to correct this. I must have overlooked it.

Duckduck