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[Deniz05]

Hallo Leute ich brauche dringend eure hielfe, ich habe in 2 wochen meine Eurocom-prüfung in englisch.Jetzt habe ich da was im internet gefunden was ich nur noch auswendig lernen muss aber ich muss da glaube ich noch einiges Um ändern.. könntet ihr mir bitte helfen.. Kann ich alles so auswenig lernen und so vorsprechen oder sollte ich einige sätze ändern.

ich wäre sehr dankbar.. Hier der text

TIMES SQUARE

The Times Square is called „big white street“ because of the neonlights.
This legendarily place had in the 1960er a big crisis. The lightplayhouses were made to sheds. So there were a lot of crazy and dangerously guys.
This ended in the 1990er.
Today there are a lot of tourists on times square
At silvester xome up to 1 million people.


ELLIS ISLAND

Ellis Island is north-west of Liberty Island.
The small island became famous of 1892 to 1917 because it was point of approach for immigrants.
The immigrants were asked and examined on their state of health .
Sometimes they must went again to there old home.
In this years came 17 million immigrants.
Today the island is a national museum.


THE CHRYSLER BUILDING

The Chrysler Building was build 1930.
The architekt of this building was Walter P. Chrysler.
With its 319 metres it was 1930 the highest building of the world, but just long, because The Empire Stae Building becam 1931 with 381 metres the title of the highest building of the world.


BROADWAY

Broadway is the most famous and the longest street in the USA with 20 km. It is also the oldest street of New York. It's the only street which goes not straight like the other streets and avenues. It is northwest from the end of Manhatten and crossed Times Square. On Broadway there are many theaters, musicals and cinemas. Many actors who played in a theatre on the Broadyway get roles in big film projects , most of that in Hollywood.


THE FIVE BORUOGHS OF NEW YORK

Bronx, Manhattan, Queens, Brooklyn and Staten Island are the five boroughs of New York. Bronx whitch is in north of Manhattan, is the only borough whitch is on the mainland.
The most famous of these five boroughs is 21 kilometres long, it is called "Manhattan".
In Manhattan are many shops, nightclubs, theatres and museums.


STATUE OF LIBERTY

Another sight is the statue of Liberty.
It was a present from the French for the Americans. The statue was built in the year 1886.you can look into the statue and walk up. People who where there says
that it is very interesting. The Statue of Liberty and the skyscrapers
are the typical landmarks of New York.


THE BROOKLYN BRIDGE

The Brooklyn Bridge is one of the famous bridges of the world. It is between
Manhattan and Brooklyn. The bridge was built in 1984 also it is over 20
years old and is the longest bridge in New York!
It is over 80 metres high and over 1 kilometre long.
Under the bridge is the East River. It is a beautiful and famous river


CENTRAL PARK

Central Park is one of the biggest parks .
Over 500 000 trees and bushes were planted there.
In the middle of the park is a
very good restaurant where you must book three weeks before, if you want to eat there.
In the park there is a zoo, sports fields a swimming pool and playgrounds .
In the summer there are often live concerts in the park.
There are a lot of skaters, musician and tourists.
The Strawberry Fields are a monument for john lennon, who was shot.

[Duckduck]

Hallo Leute ich brauche dringend Eure Hilfe, ich habe in 2 Wochen meine Eurocom-Prüfung in Englisch. Jetzt habe ich da was im Internet gefunden, was ich nur noch auswendig lernen muss, aber ich muss da, glaube, ich noch einiges umändern. Könntet Ihr mir bitte helfen. Kann ich alles so auswenig lernen und so vorsprechen, oder sollte ich einige Sätze ändern?

Ich wäre sehr dankbar.. Hier der Text

TIMES SQUARE

The Times Square is also called „big white street“ because of the neonlights.
This legendarily place suffered a big crisis in the 1960s. The cinemas were made to sheds Was meinst Du damit?. Because? there were a lot of crazy and dangerously guys.
This ended in the 1990s.
Today a lot of tourists visist Times Square.
On New Year's Eve up to 1 million people gather there to celebrate.


ELLIS ISLAND

Ellis Island is north-west of Liberty Island.
The small island became famous between 1892 and 1917 because it was the point of approach for immigrants.
The immigrants were interviewed and examined concerning their state of health .
Sometimes they were made to return to their old home.
During these years about 17 million immigrants came to the United States.
Today the island is a national museum.


THE CHRYSLER BUILDING

The Chrysler Building was built in 1930.
The architect of this building was Walter P. Chrysler.
With its 319 metres it was the highest building of the world. But not for long, because The Empire State Building (381 metres) took the title from it in 1931.


BROADWAY

Broadway, with its length of 20 kilometres, is the most famous and the longest street in the USA. It is also the oldest street of New York. Unlike the other streets and avenues it is not straight, which makes it unique. It is northwest of the end of Manhatten and crosses Times Square. On Broadway there are many theaters, musical halls and cinemas. Many actors who started off in a theatre on the Broadyway got and get roles in big film projects, most of them in Hollywood.


THE FIVE BOROUGHS OF NEW YORK

The Bronx, Manhattan, Queens, Brooklyn and Staten Island are the five boroughs of New York. The Bronx, whitch is in north of Manhattan, is the only borough whitch is on the mainland.
The most famous of these five boroughs is 21 kilometres long and it is called "Manhattan".
In Manhattan there are many shops, nightclubs, theatres and museums.


THE STATUE OF LIBERTY

Another sight is the Statue of Liberty.
It was a present from the French people to the American people. It was built in the year 1886. Because it is hollow you can look inside the statue and walk up to the top. People who where there says
that it is very interesting. The Statue of Liberty and the skyscrapers
are the typical landmarks of New York.


THE BROOKLYN BRIDGE

TheBrooklyn Bridge is one of the most famous bridges in the world. It is situated between Manhattan and Brooklyn. The bridge was built in 1984, which makes it more than 20 years old, and it is the longest bridge in New York!
It is more than 80 metres high and more than 1 kilometre long.
Under the bridge flows the East River. It is a beautiful and famous river.


CENTRAL PARK

Central Park is one of the biggest parks in the world.
Over 500 000 trees and bushes were planted there.
In the middle of the park is a very good restaurant. It is very busy so you have to make a reservation three weeks in advance if you want to eat there.
In the park there are a zoo, sports fields, a swimming pool and playgrounds.
In the summer there are many live concerts in the park.
There are a lot of skaters, musicians and tourists.
The "Strawberry Fields" are a monument for John Lennon, who was shot in New York.

Hallo

Das war ja eine ganze Menge. Ich kann so recht gar nicht mehr durchblicken und hoffe, dass ich nicht "verschlimmbessert" habe. Mir fällt u.a. auf, dass Du Dich entscheiden musst, ob Du die britische Schreibweise theatre oder die amerikanische theater verwenden willst.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Deniz05]

Alles klar vielen dank

[Keswick]

Today a lot of tourists visit Times Square.

Muss visit heissen, nicht visist .

[Duckduck]

Yo, ta!