Bitte korigieren!! POEM!

[Jefferson1992]

Den fett markierten text bitte korrigieren, DANKE
It must be, oooh, a month or more, since we last try, to show him, how it is, when he lives alone!
But every work, he has to do, does he wrong, or not in the way he should do.
We want our son, to do fewer mistakes in his work, and do it all right!
Does he understand, what we are telling him? We are of the opinion, that he is ready to start a new life, to care for him, but does he know it? Does he feel ready to step out of his cage?

Aufgabenstellung_

Write a paralell peom from the aprent´s perpective. You may decide to change the title but your poem should
-have the same beginning: It must be... since he/she
- similar in structure
-end with a question and something symbolic

Danke

[Keswick]

Den fett markierten Text bitte korrigieren, DANKE

It must have been, oooh, a month or more, since we've last tried, to show him, how it would be, if he lived on his own!
But every work, he has to do, he does wrong, or not in the way he's supposed to.
We want our son, to do less mistakes in his work, and do it all right!
Does he understand, what we are telling him? We have the opinion, that he is ready to start a new life, to look after himself, but does he know it? Does he feel ready to step out of his cage?

Aufgabenstellung_

Write a parallel poem from the apparent´s perspective. You may decide to change the title but your poem should
-have the same beginning: It must be... since he/she
- similar in structure
-end with a question and something symbolic

Danke

Zur Aufgabenstellung an sich kann ich nun natuerlich nichts sagen.