Vorstellen?

[crushover]

Hallo, ich muss mich nächste Woche vorstellen, ich habe was aufgeschrieben, nun im englischen Unterricht bin ich keine Leuchte. Ich bräuchte bitte dringend Hilfe von euch. Danke im Voraus.

Hello everybody,
let me introduce myself:
My name`s Max Mustermann and I`m 29 years old. I was born in Russia and lived there I was until 11, then I move to Germany with my parents. I live in Thuringia. Thuringia is called the green heart of Germany. Because it`s situated in the middle of Germany and there are a lot of forests. I have one younger brother
I rent a flat in stadt. I have been living there 1 year. There are two rooms.
My hobbies are playing football and fishing. Fishing is a favourite hobby of mine.

I also enjoy meetings friends, the rest of my free time I spend my time surfing on Internet.
At the moment I`m attending the Technical College "dds" in Berlin. I would like to become a Technical Engineer in two years. I would like to work, a leading position in the near future.

Thank you for your attention.

Kriege diesen Satz nicht hin:
Ich habe die 10.Klasse abgeschlossen. Eine Ausblidung als Elektroniker gemacht und war 3 Jahre in meinem Beruf tätig.

Was gehöhrt noch hinein, wenn man sich vorstellt?

[Keswick]

Hello everybody,
let me introduce myself:
My name`s Max Mustermann and I`m 29 years old. I was born in Russia and lived there I was until 11, then I moved to Germany with my parents. I live in Thuringia. Thuringia is called the green heart of Germany. Because it`s situated in the middle of Germany and there are a lot of forests. I have one younger brother.
I rent a flat in stadt (Ist das ein Ort?). I have been living there for 1 year. It's a one-bedroom flat*.
My hobbies are playing football and fishing. Fishing is my most favourite hobby.

I also enjoy meetings friends, the rest of my free time I spend my time surfing the internet.
At the moment I`m attending the Technical College "dds" in Berlin. I would like to become a Technical Engineer in two years. I would like to work in a leading position in the near future.

Thank you for your attention.

Kriege diesen Satz nicht hin:
Ich habe die 10.Klasse abgeschlossen. Eine Ausblidung als Elektroniker gemacht und war 3 Jahre in meinem Beruf tätig. (Wie wuerdest du das denn schreiben?)

Was gehöhrt noch hinein, wenn man sich vorstellt?

In England zaehlt man die Zimmer in den Wohnungen und Haeusern anders. Und zwar zaehlt man nur die Schlafzimmer. Ein Schlafzimmer plus Wohnzimmer, Bad, Kueche ist eine 1-bedroom flat. Zwei Schlafzimmer waere eine 2-bedroom flat.

Ich weiss nicht wo du dich vorstellen wirst, daher kann ich dir nicht sagen, ob in deiner Vorstellung etwas fehlt.

[Delfino]

Hello everybody!
Thank you again for inviting me here.
May I introduce myself (now)? - Please let me introduce myself.

My name is Max Mustermann and I'm 29 years old.
I was born in Russia and lived there I was until 11.
My parents moved with me and my younger brother to Germany.[/b]
I live in Thuringia, which is situated in the middle of Germany and
sometimes called the green heart of Germany
because there are a lot of forests in this part of Germany.
About one year ago I rented a one-bedroom flat in [Stadt-/Ortsname].

My most favourite hobby is Fishing. I also enjoy playing football
and meeting my friends.
I spend the rest of my free time surfing the internet.

I have successfully completed mandatory schooling
or secondary school plus a 10th year.

Afterwards I completed a professional training and got a diploma
which enabled me to work for some years as certificated electrician for the company XYZ.

At the moment I'm attending the Technical College "DDS" in Berlin. I would like to become a Technical Engineer in about two years.

(In the near future I would like to work in a leading position.
Your boss may not like to hear that your are after his job...)


Thank you for your attention. (das paßt eher für den Abschluß eines Vortrages)


Thank you again for inviting me here
and thereby giving me a chance to present myself.

[Keswick]

I was born in Russia and lived there I was until 11.

Danke Delfino. Den Rest lasse ich unkommentiert... fishing schreibt man allerdings nach wie vor klein.

[Delfino]

I was born in Russia and lived there until I was 11.

fishing schreibt man allerdings nach wie vor klein.

... ist natürlich richtig!

Beim Editieren hatte ich das Wort wahrscheinlich noch vom Kopieren des ursprünglichen Beitrags stehen (Gedankenstütze),
da es dort am Satzanfang stand war es groß geschrieben... Naja, es war wohl doch schon etwas spät gestern...