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[fr3ak]

Hallo liebe User,



ich mus für die Schule eine personal description machen. Jetzt weiß ich aber nicht, ob dass alles so richtig ist. Würdet ihr bitte mal einen Blick darauf werfen? Brauch es allerdings schon zu morgen.



Danke im Voraus.



fr3ak



This is a description about ... She is 17 and comes from Bremerhaven. Her hobbies are reading and hanging out with friends. Her favourite book at the moment is P.S. I love you written by Cecilia Ahern. She has no favourite sports, but she likes to drive with her bike. One other activity she likes doing in her spare time is listening to music, but she has no favourites, either.

In school she really likes to speak English, that’s the reason she chooses it as a “Leistungsfach”. Beside English and German she can speak Turkish. She’s also very interested in politics, because she wants to know more about governments and politicians. Because of that her 2nd “Leistungsfach” is politics.

[Keswick]

So und nochmal, wie ich es gerade schon schrieb (anderer Faden): Frueher posten!

This is a description about ... She is 17 and comes from Bremerhaven. Her hobbies are reading and socialising with friends. Her favourite book at the moment is P.S. I love you written by Cecilia Ahern. She has no favourite sports, but she likes to drive with her bike. One other activity she likes doing in her spare time is listening to music, but she has no favourites, either.

In school she really likes English, that’s the reason she chose it as a “Leistungsfach”. Beside English and German she can speak Turkish. She’s also very interested in politics, because she wants to know more about governments and politicians. Because of that her 2nd “Leistungsfach” is politics.