Hello all,
I will stay a year in Texas and i hope you can help me to correct these email:
Hello hostfamily,
I'm so glad and assuaged to come in a big family, with the same religion, so that i'm not sooo nervous .
I added Moritz yet and will talk to him soon. I got my Visa without big trouble and had a nice day in Berlin with my dad.
Thank you for the Email, it's nice to hear from you. I will fly at the 8th of August to New York and at the 14th of August to Dallas (yes the lead time startes allready xD)
I thing the most things I want to know, i can ask moritz, i will send you dialogue from msn.
Do i have internet in Tims room? And can i have some pics from your family, your pets and where you are living?
I'm looking forward to seeing you,
your Danny
ps:Sorry that i wrote so late, i was two weeks on class trip in Holland.
Thank you, i hope for quik answers
Need correction please :)
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Hello everyone,
I'm going to stay in Texas for a year
and I hope you can help me to correct this email:
______________________________________________________________________________________
Dear host family,
I'm sorry, that I'm answering you so late.
For the last two weeks I was on a school trip
with my class in Holland.
I'm so glad and happy to be welcome in your big family
with the same religion. Therefore I'm not very nervous.
I didn't add Moritz to my MSN buddy list yet,
but I will talk to him soon. I got my visa without problems
and had a nice day in Berlin with my dad.
Thank you for your last e-mail, it was nice to hear from you again.
I will fly to New York on the 8th of August and to Dallas on the 14th of August.
Yes, I've already started with the preparations of my trip.
I think I can ask Moritz via MSN about the most important things.
Will it be possible for me to access the internet in Tim's room?
May I ask you to send me some pictures of your family, your pets
and where you are living?
I'm looking forward to seeing you,
your Danny
______________________________________________________________________________________
I'm hoping for some quick answers.
Thank you.
I'm going to stay in Texas for a year
and I hope you can help me to correct this email:
______________________________________________________________________________________
Dear host family,
I'm sorry, that I'm answering you so late.
For the last two weeks I was on a school trip
with my class in Holland.
I'm so glad and happy to be welcome in your big family
with the same religion. Therefore I'm not very nervous.
I didn't add Moritz to my MSN buddy list yet,
but I will talk to him soon. I got my visa without problems
and had a nice day in Berlin with my dad.
Thank you for your last e-mail, it was nice to hear from you again.
I will fly to New York on the 8th of August and to Dallas on the 14th of August.
Yes, I've already started with the preparations of my trip.
I think I can ask Moritz via MSN about the most important things.
Will it be possible for me to access the internet in Tim's room?
May I ask you to send me some pictures of your family, your pets
and where you are living?
I'm looking forward to seeing you,
your Danny
______________________________________________________________________________________
I'm hoping for some quick answers.
Thank you.
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IELTS 7 Good user: operational command, occasional inaccuracies
IELTS 7 Good user: operational command, occasional inaccuracies
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- Anglo Veteran
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I'm going to fly to New York on August 8th, 2009 and to Dallas on August 14th, 2009.
I think, I can ask Moritz via MSN about the most important things.
Try to use capital letters when you are writing in English ...
I think, I can ask Moritz via MSN about the most important things.
Try to use capital letters when you are writing in English ...
...is supplied without liability.
IELTS 7 Good user: operational command, occasional inaccuracies
IELTS 7 Good user: operational command, occasional inaccuracies