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Schwindgasse
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Bitte um Korrektur.. =)

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Ich hoffe es ist nicht zu lange... :/
Wäre allerdings super, wenn jemand nocheinmal einen Blick darauf werfen könnte. :))


What a trip …

Mrs Weep and her husband spent their holiday in Ireland. They wanted to have an exciting boat trip. So on they asked fishermen for one. The first men they asked said no, they didn’t want to go on a boat trip when it would possibly rain or storm. The second said that they didn’t think it would rain or storm and a boat trip would be no problem. They packed some things for the trip and went on the boat.
After one or two hours the sun disappeared behind dark clouds. Everybody got in panic. They switched on their rain coats and watched the waves, which got higher and higher. At a certain point they escaped in the cabin.
When the weather turned better again the fishermen, Mrs and Mr Weep got out of the cabin in which they hid during the storm. They looked out and saw a little boat drifting around planless. Immediately all people took what they could find to help the man in the other boat who looked very helpless. They throw a rope to the man and watched him while he was coming to their boat. He came on board but suddenly he did a strange exercise. He took out a gun of his jacket. Everybody set. Nobody said a word. The man slowly came nearer and nearer. He told them all to sit down in a row when suddenly a big wave came. The man lost the balance and fell out of the boat. When the people on the boat quickly stood up to see what has happened, they only saw the tail of a very big animal. The man was vanished. They all had the same thought: “Could only be a wale which felt our emergency and wanted to help..” Also if everybody else laughed about this, from that on the people which were on the boat thanked the wale for their lives.




ella85
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Mrs Weep and her husband spent their holiday in Ireland. They wanted to have an exciting boat trip. So (keine on) they asked fishermen for one. The first men they asked said no, they didn’t want to go on a boat trip when it would possibly rain or storm. The second said that they didn’t think it would rain or storm and a boat trip would be no problem. They packed some things for the trip and went on the boat.
After one or two hours the sun disappeared behind dark clouds. Everybody got in a panic. They put on their rain coats and watched the waves, which got higher and higher. At a certain point they escaped into the cabin.
When the weather turned better again the fishermen, and Mrs and Mr Weep got out of the cabin in which they hid during the storm. They looked out and saw a little boat drifting around aimlessly. Immediately all the people took what they could find to help the man in the other boat who looked very helpless. They threw a rope to the man and watched him while he was coming to their boat. He came on board but suddenly he did a strange thing. He took out a gun of his jacket. Everybody stopped. Nobody said a word. The man slowly came nearer and nearer. He told them all to sit down in a row when suddenly a big wave came. The man lost his balance and fell out of the boat. When the people on the boat quickly stood up to see what has happened, they only saw the tail of a very big animal. The man had vanished. They all had the same thought: “Could only be a wale which felt our emergency and wanted to help..” So although everybody else laughed about this, from that on the people which were on the boat thanked the wale for their lives.

Schwindgasse
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Oh :) :danke: :danke:

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