Sätze zum Korrigieren!

[fab_f]

Hi könnt ihr bitte gucken ob ich diese sätze gramatikalisch richtig sind und auch rechtschreiblich!


Hier die Sätze
Hello, I would like to order a Vegeburger, please.
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Yes, I forgot that i would like to eat a large choclate icecream.
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Thanks and here is the money .
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My vegeburger doesnt have cheese, can I have new one ?
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Hello again, Im very thirsty and I want to order a large coke,please.
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Ok, here is the money, thanks. ....oh Im sorry
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Why you are so impolite to me? That only was a coke and I can buy you
a new one.
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Danke

[Keswick]

Was die Rechtschreibung angeht, kannst du doch ein Rechtschreibprogramm laufen lassen. Erspart uns auch ein wenig Arbeit .