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[Linda-b]

Hallo alle zusammen,
ich bräuchte wohl ein bisschen Hilfe. Ich habe einen Vorstellung meiner Person auf Englisch geschrieben wo wir Hobbys und sowas beschreiben müssen. Jetzt bin ich mir nich 100&ig sicher, ob er gramatikalisch korrekt ist. Vielleicht habt ihr ja auchnoch Verbessungsvorschläge und zusätze, die ich mit einbringen könnte.
Vielen Dank für eure Hilfe

My name is Linda. I’m 19 years old and I’m born on the 5th ***** in *****. I come from *****. *****is a little town between Rheine and Ibbenbüren. In my family we are three persons my mother, my dad and I. So I have no sisters and brothers. We live in a big house with my grandparents. My other grandparents live in ***** a little town near Rheine. I have blond hair and brown eyes. I’m ***** metres tall. I like to wear colourful clothes.

I’m working in Rheine by “*****” as an industrial clerk. We are building lifts for cars and trucks. Our parent group has his headquarter in Denmark in the city Copenhagen. In my company works 70 staffs including 15 in southern Germany. I like to work in this company because it’s very interested to know we are lifting up. My favourite subject in the Vocational school is Control & Monitoring. Before I work at “***** ” I go to the secondary school for 6 years. There were my favourite’s subject’s math and English.

In my free time I like dancing Standard and Latin American dancing at dancing school Jobmann in Rheine. But at the moment, I can not establish from time to dance. But after my training I would like to once again begin to dance. At this time in my free time I go to the pathfinder where do I start a group myself but I am still in another member. I care about in the 10-12 boys with 3 different head. In the other group where I am a member, we are about 16 people and everyone in my age. We do a lot of things together and also make frequent weekend. This year we are going to ***** and visit a brewery. In the last October the other group members fly to Mallorca but unfortunately I could not because I am still in the trial and it was not 100% say if I could get leave.

At the weekend I take me with friends and we do something like to go for example in a pub or we go to the cinema.

I’d like to go on holiday. Usually I go in the summer as the head into the summer camp. In the last year we go to Austria and this year they drive to Belgium but I can not got with because a wedding in the cliquish and I have not enough vacation days because I leave for an internship in England need. In the last summer I go to Ibiza too. I find it’s a very nice island with a few sights. Some years we are go 2 times a year to Borkum and in my childhood, we are drive each winter after the Willingen in the Sauerland.

Vielen Dank Gruß Linda

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