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Derauskarlsruhe

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Hallo,

ich habe mal einen Brief geschrieben und würde mich über eine Korrektur freuen :-)

Dear Kahrin,

i hope you are fine? I am ok. In the last three weeks i was in Sydney with two friends. We fly from Berlin to Sydney with a big plane. The fly was very beautiful. From the Sydney airport we drove with a taxi in our hotel. The hotel was very nice and the stuff very friendly. We went in our room and slept 12 hours. On the next day we went in the city and ate a big ice. In the second week we went to the beach and enjoyed the nice weather and the sun. The last week in Sydney was very bored, because the weather was bad and i was sick. On the last day in Sydney we went again in the city and bought souvenir thinks and than we flew home.

I look forward to our forthcoming meeting.

Best wishes,
Karl

Liebe Grüße




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Re: Bitte um eine Korrektur

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Derauskarlsruhe hat geschrieben: Dear Kahrin,

I hope you are fine? I am okay. I spent the last three weeks in Sydney with two friends. We flew from Berlin to Sydney with a big plane. The flight was very beautiful. From the Sydney airport we took a taxi to our hotel. The hotel was very nice and the staff were very friendly. We went into our room and slept for 12 hours. The next day we went to the city and had a big portion of ice cream. In the second week we went to the beach and enjoyed the nice weather and the sun. The last week in Sydney was very boring, because the weather was bad and I was ill. On the last day in Sydney we went to the city again and bought souvenirs thinks and then we flew home.

I look forward to our forthcoming meeting.

Best wishes,
Karl
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